My 46th Father's Day

  
      On my 46th Father’s Day 
        I’d finally have my say

      For I’d heard the pleasantries before
        they all seemed like cliches

      Ties and tie-pins made such fine gifts
        for the first 20 years, if you catch my drift

      Going out to eat was never much of a treat
         for a table you have to love to compete

      So, this year I awoke and looked my wife right in the eye
         and popped the question: Am I a good father?
                                                         ~ Don’t tell me a lie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 6/17/2025 7:11:00 AM
Aww! Like my Pastor said on Sunday it is NEVER too late to give encouraging words! Hugs
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Date: 6/16/2025 2:11:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "My 46th Father's Day" write. Hope you had a great day on Sunday. I bet her answer was yes. Now For a #2 write with her answer. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 6/16/2025 7:14:00 AM
You're a good father, my guess she said...then went back to sleep. Why did she not make reference to husband? You're also, a fine poet in my estimation. I've known my wife long enough now not to ask questions...and just listen.
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Date: 6/16/2025 5:20:00 AM
wow! my husband so often wonders the same thing, his quality of fatherhood comes into play as he reflects. Sometimes he seems to torture himself even though he knows no one is a perfect parent....yellow rose
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