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My 2 Lil Angels

My two lil angel brothers Came back again It was so beatific ,That I can't express Younger one Lucky, embossed me tight Elder oneRocky,with beholding sight I hugged and kissed both of them Happiness & tears together running then Before anyone utter a sound They commenced by seeing the crowd "We are sorry, sorry to all We won't play again near the canal" Soon I heard ringing alarm Unfortunately my eyes opened I found no one around It was morning-intense dark Neither of them nor the crowd Only I'm here all alone My two lil angels are so amore That you had called them up You are so selfish - I sum up I know in the heaven They are getting a lot of your adore But God we are missing them more Send them God, send them back to earth Send my two lil angels back to us.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/18/2019 10:37:00 AM

My first family loss was my Aunt when she was forty and shortly after my dad and a few days later my Grandfather. It was a lot all so close together. Still time marches on and there is more living to be done.

Sakshi Singh
Date: 9/18/2019 10:48:00 AM

It's really painful to lose sm1 who r very close to our heart...so much painful!

Sabrina Niday Hansel

Date: 3/25/2018 6:08:00 AM

I'm sorry for your loss! This is great! I could feel your emotions in each word! Congratulations on your win also!

Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/25/2018 8:09:00 AM

Yeah! Thanks!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/18/2018 3:04:00 AM

Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, Sakshi - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-)

Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/18/2018 3:06:00 AM

Thank you so much for such a chummy comment !

Eve Roper

Date: 3/17/2018 6:16:00 PM

Sakshi, well done and enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*

Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/17/2018 6:39:00 PM

Thank you! Thank you so much! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2018 2:19:00 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Sakshi :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/17/2018 5:47:00 PM

Ooh! Really? ? Thanks for the good news.Happy weekend :)))

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/17/2018 10:23:00 AM

What a touching and endearing poem relating a tragedy one never recovers from. Well done, Sakshi. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Congrats.

Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/17/2018 10:25:00 AM

Oooh! That means a lot to me really. Thank you soooo... much! ,Line Gauthier

Silent One

Date: 2/16/2018 12:49:00 PM

But you are so young..

Sakshi Singh
Date: 2/16/2018 5:09:00 PM

My brothers were only 8 & 10 years old.

Silent One

Date: 2/16/2018 11:32:00 AM

Oh no this is heartbreaking....

Sakshi Singh
Date: 2/16/2018 11:35:00 AM

Bitter part of Growth in life as we start losing our loved one

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/16/2018 9:45:00 AM

This is heartbreaking. If this is your history I am so sorry for your tremendous loss.

Sakshi Singh
Date: 2/16/2018 10:00:00 AM

Yeah its really happened with me & actually this was first time in my life i lost my loving one

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/16/2018 4:21:00 AM

- A very sad poem written with your feelings, Sakshi - Lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sakshi Singh
Date: 2/16/2018 4:22:00 AM

Thank you so much!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 2/15/2018 10:51:00 AM

Such a beautiful written poem, I really feel the pain in it, you see what happens, it happens for a reason, I wish happiness to you and may you get over the grief, good luck and one last thing, I m 15 so you can t really call me sir, brother or in local language bhai will be more appropriate

Sakshi Singh
Date: 2/15/2018 5:42:00 PM

Oops! sorry . I will be pleased to call you "bhai".so... Thank you so much bhai for appreciating my poem.

Emma Green

Date: 2/11/2018 10:31:00 AM

' Because there lies the secret to world peace. Let all rejoice and give each other a big kiss. I'm going to break out into some Irving Berlin music now. ' There is charm above which made me smile. Was as if your questioning and searching truth of how it is for so many as they move one place to another - sometimes to escape tyranny, sometimes to seek personal worth, peace and hope. Then, perhaps the quote i've chosen, shows that perhaps.. just perhaps, you realise that yours could be seen as a dream.. If words could make such things happen... yours would be a cure.

Sakshi Singh
Date: 2/11/2018 9:19:00 PM

Thanks! It means a lot to me.