Sakshi Singh Poet Elegy

My 2 Lil Angels

My two lil angel brothers
Came back again 
It was so beatific ,That I can't express 
Younger one Lucky, embossed me tight 
Elder oneRocky,with beholding sight 
I hugged and kissed both of them 
Happiness & tears together running then 
Before anyone utter a sound 
They commenced by seeing the crowd 
"We are sorry, sorry to all
 We won't play again near the canal"
Soon I heard ringing alarm 
Unfortunately my eyes opened 
I found no one around 
It was morning-intense dark
Neither of them nor the crowd 
Only I'm here all alone 
My two lil angels are so amore 
That you had called them up
You are so selfish - I sum up
I know in the heaven 
They are getting a lot of your adore 
But God we are missing them more 
Send them God, send them back to earth
Send my two lil angels back to us.

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Richard Lamoureux September 18, 2019 at 10:37 AM My first family loss was my Aunt when she was forty and shortly after my dad and a few days later my Grandfather. It was a lot all so close together. Still time marches on and there is more living to be done. Sakshi Singh September 18, 2019 at 10:48 AM It's really painful to lose sm1 who r very close to our heart...so much painful!

Sabrina Niday Hansel March 25, 2018 at 6:08 AM I'm sorry for your loss! This is great! I could feel your emotions in each word! Congratulations on your win also! Sakshi Singh March 25, 2018 at 8:09 AM Yeah! Thanks!

Gregory Richard Barden March 18, 2018 at 3:04 AM Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, Sakshi - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-) Sakshi Singh March 18, 2018 at 3:06 AM Thank you so much for such a chummy comment !

Eve Roper March 17, 2018 at 6:16 PM Sakshi, well done and enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`* Sakshi Singh March 17, 2018 at 6:39 PM Thank you! Thank you so much! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2018 at 2:19 PM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Sakshi :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sakshi Singh March 17, 2018 at 5:47 PM Ooh! Really? ? Thanks for the good news.Happy weekend :)))

Line Gauthier March 17, 2018 at 10:23 AM What a touching and endearing poem relating a tragedy one never recovers from. Well done, Sakshi. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Congrats. Sakshi Singh March 17, 2018 at 10:25 AM Oooh! That means a lot to me really. Thank you soooo... much! ,Line Gauthier

Silent One February 16, 2018 at 12:49 PM But you are so young.. Sakshi Singh February 16, 2018 at 5:09 PM My brothers were only 8 & 10 years old.

Silent One February 16, 2018 at 11:32 AM Oh no this is heartbreaking.... Sakshi Singh February 16, 2018 at 11:35 AM Bitter part of Growth in life as we start losing our loved one

Richard Lamoureux February 16, 2018 at 9:45 AM This is heartbreaking. If this is your history I am so sorry for your tremendous loss. Sakshi Singh February 16, 2018 at 10:00 AM Yeah its really happened with me & actually this was first time in my life i lost my loving one

Anne-Lise Andresen February 16, 2018 at 4:21 AM - A very sad poem written with your feelings, Sakshi - Lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sakshi Singh February 16, 2018 at 4:22 AM Thank you so much!

Faraz Ajmal February 15, 2018 at 10:51 AM Such a beautiful written poem, I really feel the pain in it, you see what happens, it happens for a reason, I wish happiness to you and may you get over the grief, good luck and one last thing, I m 15 so you can t really call me sir, brother or in local language bhai will be more appropriate Sakshi Singh February 15, 2018 at 5:42 PM Oops! sorry . I will be pleased to call you "bhai".so... Thank you so much bhai for appreciating my poem.

Emma Green February 11, 2018 at 10:31 AM ' Because there lies the secret to world peace. Let all rejoice and give each other a big kiss. I'm going to break out into some Irving Berlin music now. ' There is charm above which made me smile. Was as if your questioning and searching truth of how it is for so many as they move one place to another - sometimes to escape tyranny, sometimes to seek personal worth, peace and hope. Then, perhaps the quote i've chosen, shows that perhaps.. just perhaps, you realise that yours could be seen as a dream.. If words could make such things happen... yours would be a cure. Sakshi Singh February 11, 2018 at 9:19 PM Thanks! It means a lot to me.