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My 2 Lil Angels

My two lil angel brothers
Came back again 
It was so beatific ,That I can't express 
Younger one Lucky, embossed me tight 
Elder oneRocky,with beholding sight 
I hugged and kissed both of them 
Happiness & tears together running then 
Before anyone utter a sound 
They commenced by seeing the crowd 
"We are sorry, sorry to all
 We won't play again near the canal"
Soon I heard ringing alarm 
Unfortunately my eyes opened 
I found no one around 
It was morning-intense dark
Neither of them nor the crowd 
Only I'm here all alone 
My two lil angels are so amore 
That you had called them up
You are so selfish - I sum up
I know in the heaven 
They are getting a lot of your adore 
But God we are missing them more 
Send them God, send them back to earth
Send my two lil angels back to us.

Copyright © Sakshi Singh | Year Posted 2017

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/18/2019 10:37:00 AM My first family loss was my Aunt when she was forty and shortly after my dad and a few days later my Grandfather. It was a lot all so close together. Still time marches on and there is more living to be done. Login to Reply Sakshi Singh Date: 9/18/2019 10:48:00 AM It's really painful to lose sm1 who r very close to our heart...so much painful!

Sabrina Niday Hansel Date: 3/25/2018 6:08:00 AM I'm sorry for your loss! This is great! I could feel your emotions in each word! Congratulations on your win also! Login to Reply Sakshi Singh Date: 3/25/2018 8:09:00 AM Yeah! Thanks!

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/18/2018 3:04:00 AM Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, Sakshi - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-) Login to Reply Sakshi Singh Date: 3/18/2018 3:06:00 AM Thank you so much for such a chummy comment !

Eve Roper Date: 3/17/2018 6:16:00 PM Sakshi, well done and enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`* Login to Reply Sakshi Singh Date: 3/17/2018 6:39:00 PM Thank you! Thank you so much! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2018 2:19:00 PM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Sakshi :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sakshi Singh Date: 3/17/2018 5:47:00 PM Ooh! Really? ? Thanks for the good news.Happy weekend :)))

Line Gauthier Date: 3/17/2018 10:23:00 AM What a touching and endearing poem relating a tragedy one never recovers from. Well done, Sakshi. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Congrats. Login to Reply Sakshi Singh Date: 3/17/2018 10:25:00 AM Oooh! That means a lot to me really. Thank you soooo... much! ,Line Gauthier

Silent One Date: 2/16/2018 12:49:00 PM But you are so young.. Login to Reply Sakshi Singh Date: 2/16/2018 5:09:00 PM My brothers were only 8 & 10 years old.

Silent One Date: 2/16/2018 11:32:00 AM Oh no this is heartbreaking.... Login to Reply Sakshi Singh Date: 2/16/2018 11:35:00 AM Bitter part of Growth in life as we start losing our loved one

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/16/2018 9:45:00 AM This is heartbreaking. If this is your history I am so sorry for your tremendous loss. Login to Reply Sakshi Singh Date: 2/16/2018 10:00:00 AM Yeah its really happened with me & actually this was first time in my life i lost my loving one

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/16/2018 4:21:00 AM - A very sad poem written with your feelings, Sakshi - Lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sakshi Singh Date: 2/16/2018 4:22:00 AM Thank you so much!

Faraz Ajmal Date: 2/15/2018 10:51:00 AM Such a beautiful written poem, I really feel the pain in it, you see what happens, it happens for a reason, I wish happiness to you and may you get over the grief, good luck and one last thing, I m 15 so you can t really call me sir, brother or in local language bhai will be more appropriate Login to Reply Sakshi Singh Date: 2/15/2018 5:42:00 PM Oops! sorry . I will be pleased to call you "bhai".so... Thank you so much bhai for appreciating my poem.

Emma Green Date: 2/11/2018 10:31:00 AM ' Because there lies the secret to world peace. Let all rejoice and give each other a big kiss. I'm going to break out into some Irving Berlin music now. ' There is charm above which made me smile. Was as if your questioning and searching truth of how it is for so many as they move one place to another - sometimes to escape tyranny, sometimes to seek personal worth, peace and hope. Then, perhaps the quote i've chosen, shows that perhaps.. just perhaps, you realise that yours could be seen as a dream.. If words could make such things happen... yours would be a cure. Login to Reply Sakshi Singh Date: 2/11/2018 9:19:00 PM Thanks! It means a lot to me.