Mutual Spirits

I climb through dense brambles to hide.
Light flickers to find me,
I don’t feel safe here, and run on.

I’m in a dark house and move back and back through the rooms.
I hear him asking someone if they had seen me.
I curl up tighter into my hidden place under old clothes.

I feel him closer.
I don’t see him.
I run again and find a disconnected darkness.

As I cover myself with leaves,
It all begins to fade, 
The darkness, the details, the uneasiness;

I awake, and sit up clearing the cobwebs of the dream out of my sleep.
I reach out for my husband.
He raises to his elbow and touches me.

His sleepy voice says, “Oh good, you’re here — 
I’ve been chasing after you,
And no one would tell me where you were.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 6/2/2012 1:55:00 PM
Fantastic telling here of your dream. I am glad that upon waking he told you without knowing it that he was the one chasing you in your dream. The approach in this story is fantastic. TLee
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Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 6/2/2012 6:10:00 PM
Thank you Terry. (TLee) This is also a true story. Every once in a while we would each have this same dream on the same night. I have no idea why I would be running from such a special man, but that is how it went. ~J~
Date: 5/29/2012 2:52:00 PM
Two met in a dream. How unusual. How romantic. Love this one. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 6/2/2012 6:12:00 PM
Thank you for your comment Daver. It was romantic that we would be in the same scenario on the same night. But it was a true story. ~J~
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