Mutterings of a Senseless Soul

The mystical allure 
Of an island in the sun
Embraced by deepest waters 
Of sparkling sapphire blue
A tranquil sanctum
A secret retreat
A calling from within
Where one day two sweet lovers meet
And on this Isle their hearts entwined
Where promises and vows were made
A love eternal
A love divine
A love that stood the test of time

Now all alone I live here still
Known as the loner on the hill
For one night many years ago
A storm it raged and roared below
My darling he was swept away
How I survived I’ll never know
And now each night I hear him call
In poignant guise of whale songs
Pitiful songs
A haunting refrain
Of love long gone
As they call out his name
For now I am ancient
All withered and frail
The only words muttered
Incomprehensible now

These mutterings of a senseless soul
Professing her deepest love
Driven to distraction
Oh so many years ago 
For tonight she's truly ready
It is now her time to go
So making her way down
Over perilous rocks below
He will surely come to greet 
Her loving heart doth tell her so
She hears his songs of love
From so many years ago
The sea it gently takes her
Wrapped within its sparkling waves 
Tentatively transporting her  
Deep down into her watery grave
Now every night their songs of love
Enchant and mesmerise the Isle
Two lovers dance forevermore
To songs of whales
Sweet songs of love

Written 21st February 2020

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Date: 2/21/2020 1:38:00 PM
Hello Ann Gilmore, two lovers found each other again in death,now together again. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/21/2020 5:42:00 PM
Hello Ann, yes i am well thank you. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/21/2020 1:41:00 PM
Hello Darlene how nice to hear from you and I hope you are well my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/21/2020 8:23:00 AM
SO hauntingly romantic, Ann~ I love it.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/21/2020 8:37:00 AM
Thank you Line so glad you love it! Now must get dressed for soon it will be night, and all I've done today is write, write, write. hahaha... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/21/2020 7:55:00 AM
Very well written Ann. I hope all is well. Take care :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/21/2020 8:12:00 AM
Bless you dear Heidi, yes I'm okay and I hope you are too dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/21/2020 7:07:00 AM
A lovely tale of mystical allure Ann--two souls together now.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/21/2020 8:08:00 AM
Many thanks dear Vijay for your beautiful comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/21/2020 4:39:00 AM
Well composed Ann, romantic lines tinged with sadness. Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/21/2020 4:48:00 AM
Thanks Tom, a little different for me, but I awoke with these images in my head, so needed to express them before they disappeared. Hope all is well with you and your family. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/21/2020 4:16:00 AM
This is nice...I enjoyed it...
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/21/2020 4:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Arturo so pleased you enjoyed it my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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