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Mutiny by Food In Me

Woke up from deep peaceful sleep Acid reflux turquoise troubling me With regret I rethink what'd I eat Cheesy potato skins culprit me thinks The food is rebelling behind my breast Like blue boat sailing in my chest Gas and vomit won’t let me rest I must eat better I cranberry confess

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/27/2024 1:33:00 PM

Good one.. Karen. Powerful reminders of days long Ago. HNY Pangie

Karen Jones
Date: 12/27/2024 6:32:00 PM

Thanks Pangie!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2024 12:56:00 PM

I love the title and concept of this little poem, also there have been a few times I have known this grosss sensation!! Good one.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/18/2024 10:42:00 PM

Thanks Andrea hugs!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/10/2024 4:04:00 PM

Yup…as we get older especially!

Karen Jones
Date: 12/10/2024 4:25:00 PM

Growing older is not for the faint of heart! lol

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/10/2024 3:01:00 AM

Must have been some old potato. The early one are tasty with some butter.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/10/2024 6:00:00 AM

I hope not was at a restaurant having birthday dinner. I think it was just too cheesy lol plus I don’t eat meat so only had salad and potatoes.

Michael Tor

Date: 12/9/2024 6:25:00 PM

Karen you are right the foods you eat are important. Check out the Food Babe channel she tells you of all the harmful ingredients to look for in your food. Thanks for sharing...

Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2024 8:21:00 PM

Hugs thanks for reading