Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

Mutiny by Food In Me

Woke up from deep peaceful sleep
Acid reflux turquoise troubling me
With regret I rethink what'd I eat
Cheesy potato skins culprit me thinks

The food is rebelling behind my breast
Like blue boat sailing in my chest
Gas and vomit won’t let me rest
I must eat better I cranberry confess

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Panagiota Romios December 27, 2024 at 1:33 PM Good one.. Karen. Powerful reminders of days long Ago. HNY Pangie Karen Jones December 27, 2024 at 6:32 PM Thanks Pangie!

Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2024 at 12:56 PM I love the title and concept of this little poem, also there have been a few times I have known this grosss sensation!! Good one. Karen Jones December 18, 2024 at 10:42 PM Thanks Andrea hugs!

Kim Rodrigues December 10, 2024 at 4:04 PM Yup…as we get older especially! Karen Jones December 10, 2024 at 4:25 PM Growing older is not for the faint of heart! lol

Victor Buhagiar December 10, 2024 at 3:01 AM Must have been some old potato. The early one are tasty with some butter. Karen Jones December 10, 2024 at 6:00 AM I hope not was at a restaurant having birthday dinner. I think it was just too cheesy lol plus I don’t eat meat so only had salad and potatoes.

Michael Tor December 9, 2024 at 6:25 PM Karen you are right the foods you eat are important. Check out the Food Babe channel she tells you of all the harmful ingredients to look for in your food. Thanks for sharing... Karen Jones December 9, 2024 at 8:21 PM Hugs thanks for reading

John Read December 9, 2024 at 11:48 AM Hi Karen, whenever I suffer from acid reflux I chew a piece of dry Ginger,which seems to work for me. Fighting fire with fire. xx Karen Jones December 9, 2024 at 2:08 PM Cool beans John! Thanks for the information!

Zyrool Gifford December 9, 2024 at 5:43 AM Hello Karen, I understand this feeling as I struggle with this as well, I find fennel tea helps me. Hope it gets better soon. Have a great day. Karen Jones December 9, 2024 at 8:36 AM Thank you! I will take note and try!

Tom Cunningham December 9, 2024 at 4:18 AM Hate that feeling Karen, glass of cold milk should sort it. Tom Karen Jones December 9, 2024 at 5:25 AM Ew I don’t drink milk like that. lol if I had some would be almond milk. Thanks Tom!