Mute Monorhyme

Bloody windows grin with people looking in
Four empty spaces pulsating from within
So many dreams don't fit .. feel  spasms in my chin
Those useless lips of mine can't tell me if I scream....

for Brian Strand's Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 12:52 PM
a very fitting title for this grim monorhyme, Iolanda and it seems to go along with the other poem I just saw,at least somewhat. I need to tell you. I just left a message on your most current poetry post. However, I don't think it went thru. I can't see it showing. also, the page is very strange looking. Go take a look at it. If you have no comments it's because of the strange way your page turned out. I bet you can fix it by reposting. LUv, Andrea
Onclaud Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 10:27 AM
outsatnding, iols... that broken glass feel sens me reeling! winning luck to you..;) huggs
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