Mute

I stop at times My thoughts pause or I mute them all . Nope ; I recline in some other thoughts Some other savage thoughts Without a language ,without a dream I mute them all . Like those creepy eyes ,thoughts spring up again after an unquenched lustful ******.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/8/2024 9:19:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Phil Capitano

Date: 12/15/2016 4:15:00 AM

Great wordplay ~ "unquenched lustful orgasm" makes me shiver.

Bishnu Bhusal
Date: 12/15/2016 4:33:00 AM

Well Phil had orgasm been perfect it would never happen again . It's akin to a blessing . Alas ! It repeats n repeats to secure something utopian ..