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Mustangs

Mustangs are wild and free Always moving forward And never turning back They run under the sky And sleep under the stars As one family They run though the grass And swim in the water Conquering the land With the wind in their hair And freedom in their eyes They are mustangs January 2018

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Date: 1/22/2022 7:38:00 AM
I love how you express freedom in your poem. Horses are beautiful animals and should be free. Well-written piece, Amya!
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Date: 1/21/2022 6:44:00 PM
Amya, I really like this and all your horse poems that came to my inbox today. Keep them coming. You do a great job of conveying the freedom that horses represent. Welcome!
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Date: 1/21/2022 2:58:00 PM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup Amya. It is very nice to meet you through your poetry. I adore horses and used to ride a lot when younger. I enjoyed your lovely poem. Aloha and Blessings, Connie
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Date: 5/29/2018 1:59:00 PM
Nicely done -JT
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Date: 3/9/2018 6:27:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem. Well done, Amya.
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Date: 3/6/2018 2:07:00 AM
Thank you for sharing. Nice upbeat one
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Date: 2/28/2018 8:41:00 AM
I like the contrast of "wild and free", but "as one family."
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Date: 2/25/2018 11:18:00 PM
Lovely poem about mustangs Amya! They truly are magnificent animals. Welcome to poetry soup! :)
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Amya Ranck
Date: 3/3/2018 3:07:00 PM
Thank you so much I’m so happy to be in poetry soup!

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