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Musky Secrets

Death carried in hand, Abdomen painted in red; Black widows command. Nathan Bane Leccese © All Rights Reserved 06/30/09

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Date: 9/22/2009 8:30:00 AM
Nice and short, wish I wasn't so long winded, but your style is great and short, love the poem. God Bless Robert A. Ball
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Date: 9/9/2009 6:47:00 PM
bad bugs, nice poem
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Date: 9/8/2009 5:30:00 PM
Very descriptive Haiku. I can just see the death. Sara
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Date: 8/22/2009 11:39:00 AM
Excellent Haiku Nathan>>James
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Date: 8/20/2009 12:35:00 PM
Powerful piece with much for the reader to think about. I like the rhyme. Interesting title. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Karen
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