Musky Secrets

Death carried in hand,
Abdomen painted in red;
Black widows command.

Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 06/30/09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ball Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 8:30 AM
Nice and short, wish I wasn't so long winded, but your style is great and short, love the poem. God Bless Robert A. Ball
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September 9, 2009 at 6:47 PM
bad bugs, nice poem
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September 8, 2009 at 5:30 PM
Very descriptive Haiku. I can just see the death. Sara
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August 22, 2009 at 11:39 AM
Excellent Haiku Nathan>>James
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August 20, 2009 at 12:35 PM
Powerful piece with much for the reader to think about. I like the rhyme. Interesting title. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Karen
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