Musings on Raindrops

The gentle cool raindrops 
Bestowing the vibe of a caressing mother’s hand

The plump and shiny raindrops
Shimmering like pearls embraced the neck of the angelic lady

The drops falling on the roof
Hold the purity of tears that well out from a love’s eyes

When it downpours,
Resonates garrulous and reminds loquacious people

Dangling raindrops at the tips of blades
Have the richness of the prettiest millennium star diamonds 

The drops that fall on the empty vessels
Echoes like spinning marbles that dropped from a child’s hand.

The adhesive rain drops on the window glass 
Symbolise one’s deep attachment with bosom friend

When they roll on the lotus leaf
Show how the pure hearts never get affected by sin 

When they go deep into a pup’s fur coat 
It’s fun! The pretty pup makes tremors to dry up its body 

The dried and cracked earth gets chilled 
And the dews of elixir sprinkle love and joy everywhere.



Place : 2nd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 7/2/2024 4:15:00 AM
I am delighted to see your name on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/2/2024 8:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for your best compliments.
Date: 6/25/2024 7:01:00 PM
Dear Patri, your musings on raindrops (great title) captivated my imagination with beautiful imagery and wonderful personification. Congratulations for your win in Jcb's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/26/2024 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much for appreciating my lines.
Date: 6/18/2024 6:12:00 AM
wonderful write many blessings
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/18/2024 9:22:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my lines.
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