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Musings on Raindrops

The gentle cool raindrops Bestowing the vibe of a caressing mother’s hand The plump and shiny raindrops Shimmering like pearls embraced the neck of the angelic lady The drops falling on the roof Hold the purity of tears that well out from a love’s eyes When it downpours, Resonates garrulous and reminds loquacious people Dangling raindrops at the tips of blades Have the richness of the prettiest millennium star diamonds The drops that fall on the empty vessels Echoes like spinning marbles that dropped from a child’s hand. The adhesive rain drops on the window glass Symbolise one’s deep attachment with bosom friend When they roll on the lotus leaf Show how the pure hearts never get affected by sin When they go deep into a pup’s fur coat It’s fun! The pretty pup makes tremors to dry up its body The dried and cracked earth gets chilled And the dews of elixir sprinkle love and joy everywhere. Place : 2nd

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Date: 7/2/2024 4:15:00 AM
I am delighted to see your name on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/2/2024 8:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for your best compliments.
Date: 6/25/2024 7:01:00 PM
Dear Patri, your musings on raindrops (great title) captivated my imagination with beautiful imagery and wonderful personification. Congratulations for your win in Jcb's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/26/2024 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much for appreciating my lines.
Date: 6/18/2024 6:12:00 AM
wonderful write many blessings
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/18/2024 9:22:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my lines.

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