Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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Written - 8th February 2024

Musings of Love Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Ink Empress

Musings of Love

Love's holding one safely in your keeping
Tenderly in your arms whilst you're sleeping 
Love's glorious and generous always
Till the ending of your life's precious days.

Love is desiring when you are apart
It’s completely handing someone your heart
The magic moments that brighten your days 
Moments that you’ll both treasure for always.

Love is filling each day and night with bliss
Saying I love you with a tender kiss
It’s turning a home into a lagoon
Where every day becomes a honeymoon.

Love is the answer to every prayer
Love’s having someone who is always there
Love is the song one's heart constantly sings
Love's the musing that plays upon heart strings.

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Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen March 11, 2024 at 2:46 PM Very well written adored reading your work many blessings

Ink Empress February 20, 2024 at 6:04 AM Dear beryl , beautiful rhymes and flow of thoughts and facts of true love. I love the way youv described what love is especially the opening lines really stood out for me. Love definitely is desiring whether near or far. Thank you for sharing this. Congratulations on your win Beryl Edmonds February 20, 2024 at 11:46 AM Thank you so much Ink, your comments are most encouraging. Blessings, Beryl

Maria Williams February 11, 2024 at 7:11 PM A beautiful sentiment and prayer Beryl, When there is love, life is one great honeymoon indeed. It negates all negative influences - thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts...Hugs Maria Beryl Edmonds February 11, 2024 at 7:40 PM Thank you Maria, for reading and commenting, lovely words that mean a lot. Hugs in return, Beryl

Victor Buhagiar February 9, 2024 at 11:55 AM Ti voglio bene. The best way to describe love which translated means I wish you all the best. Selfishness kills all love. Beryl Edmonds February 11, 2024 at 7:38 PM Victor, thank you for the best wishes, it’s correct what you’ve said, selfishness destroys good love. Beryl

Sam Kauffman February 9, 2024 at 11:25 AM Hi Belle! Truly "love is the answer to every prayer." Your words are infused with tenderness. I especially like "every day becomes a honeymoon." What a beautiful perspective and a great challenge for lovers - Make every day like a honeymoon. Thank you for sharing your musings. They are lovely and very inspirational. Blessings! Beryl Edmonds February 11, 2024 at 7:26 PM Thank you so much Sam, beautiful comments of encouragement that mean a lot, truly. Belle

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 9, 2024 at 4:27 AM Dearest Beryl, Wow, your portrayal of love's embrace is pure magic! From the tender sleep imagery to the "lagoon home" metaphor, each line reverberates with love's power to comfort, inspire, and transform. You capture its essence as an answer to prayer, a constant song, and a beautiful honeymoon daily.I hope you win the contest! - Blessings, Daniel Beryl Edmonds February 11, 2024 at 7:24 PM Thank you very much Daniel, I’m honoured by your comments, they’re a treasure. Blessings in return, Beryl

Hiya Sharma February 8, 2024 at 9:35 PM Awwn, what an ethereal and magical write this is, beautiful Belle!! I absolutely adore how elegantly you've created the sumptuous aura of love and the mesmerizing emotions connected with it. You've beautifully described how it feels to find our home in someone's heart.. The feeling of warmth and tranquility that it gives.. This is a FAV for me, absolutely. Love your artistic wordsmithery. Best wishes to you for the contest, keep writing and shining always! :) Beryl Edmonds February 11, 2024 at 7:21 PM Thank you so much Hiva, comments I’ll cherish that warm my heart. Blessings forwarded to you, Belle

Bill Baker February 8, 2024 at 9:29 PM Excellent entry for the contest, Beryl. A FAV for my list, my friend. It seems you've got this Love thing all figured out. :-) Hugs, Bill Beryl Edmonds February 11, 2024 at 7:19 PM Thank you poet pal Bill, comments and fave, :-) Hugs in return. Beryl