Musings

I ponder about the life of a tree as I sit across from it 
watching ripples disturb its mirrored image
that lays gentle on the surface of a pond
I can't help but wonder
how many ripples its seen over its years
how many different images of itself it has known

Like my own life
the ripples of years wash towards me
and carry with them the different images I've known
I'm not as old or as wondrous as this tree
neither do I have its beauty or its grace
it has stretched its limbs far beyond its boundaries
I have not
and though I can see I wonder 
of all the years I've lived my life
I've been here no longer 
then the years it took to grow the breadth of a single limb

Life is the only thing we have in common
both our lives are reflected in the ripples that cross the ages
that rush towards us until our end

Contest GIF 1 2/24/20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 1:10 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your awesome win with this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 3:59 PM
Great word usage, Frederic, very engaging piece that mesmerizes its readers and worthy indeed to be in 1st place, my thanks for your participation, Aloha, William
Ashley Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 7:04 PM
I am deeply moved by the artistic finesse and enchanting power of such profound pondering, dear Frederic. Your poem's elegant contemplation finds my beating heart across the many miles and causes me to linger in the rich thoughtful beauty that gently reverberates between each and every ripple. Such eloquent musings sweep me up and away, a fav! Warmest wishes always, dear poet and wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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