Musing Weight

word salad sandwiches,
poetry soup
forms a la mode,
doubly scooped

delectable morsels,
my lunches of late
with footle in mouth,
why don't I lose weight?
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Hankins Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 1:53 PM
Hmmm...one thing poetry cannot help you do, Jeff...is lose weight. Lose sleep, maybe, but never weight!
Kyser Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 2:30 PM
Well, I was hoping time in front of the screen was better than time in front of the fridge :-)
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