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Musical Submarine

Musical submarine 
Down South
John Lennon, toilet paper and comb
Hendrix put down his guitar
Hummed and sang  rrrr, brrr, dooo

Ride of the Valkyres
At the Royal Albert Hall
Nearly four thousand players 
What a buzz in the place
Good vibrations

Alabama Vest
Warren Herbert Frost
George D Smith
Africans before them
Ceremonial noises
Mirliton and membramophone
Exhibited at a dedicated museum

A Kazoo

Jack Horne for Nette’s Sound Madness contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/3/2011 4:48:00 PM
Congrats Jack on a top notch win with this excellent entry luv.. always amazing.my friend..
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Date: 11/3/2011 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Sound Madness" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2011 12:01:00 PM
Jack this is amazing and utterly entertaining.. so many musical references .. the Kazoo at the end is priceless and precious .. good luck in the contest.. a golden treasure my friend...
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Date: 10/12/2011 7:30:00 PM
I feel the beat with sweat and heat and this is so very neat!
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Date: 10/12/2011 1:31:00 AM
Hey, you surprised me with this one. I'd never have guessed the kazoo. VERY unique entry, Jack!
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Date: 10/11/2011 5:39:00 PM
Reads like a winning work to me..Good luck in the contest..Very creative indeed..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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