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Musical Submarine

Musical submarine Down South John Lennon, toilet paper and comb Hendrix put down his guitar Hummed and sang rrrr, brrr, dooo Ride of the Valkyres At the Royal Albert Hall Nearly four thousand players What a buzz in the place Good vibrations Alabama Vest Warren Herbert Frost George D Smith Africans before them Ceremonial noises Mirliton and membramophone Exhibited at a dedicated museum A Kazoo Jack Horne for Nette’s Sound Madness contest

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Date: 11/3/2011 4:48:00 PM
Congrats Jack on a top notch win with this excellent entry luv.. always amazing.my friend..
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Date: 11/3/2011 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Sound Madness" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2011 12:01:00 PM
Jack this is amazing and utterly entertaining.. so many musical references .. the Kazoo at the end is priceless and precious .. good luck in the contest.. a golden treasure my friend...
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Date: 10/12/2011 7:30:00 PM
I feel the beat with sweat and heat and this is so very neat!
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Date: 10/12/2011 1:31:00 AM
Hey, you surprised me with this one. I'd never have guessed the kazoo. VERY unique entry, Jack!
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Date: 10/11/2011 5:39:00 PM
Reads like a winning work to me..Good luck in the contest..Very creative indeed..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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