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Musical Notes

vocal
lifting spirits
a haunting melody
rhythm, timbre, harmonious sounds
~ music



Written by Lee Ramage
September 10, 2011
For Contest by Nette Onclaud
“Melody of Cinquain”
Won 7th place

musiccinquain

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Dr.Ram Mehta

September 12, 2011 at 9:07 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Lee

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 12, 2011 at 9:18 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Melody Of Cinquain" contest Lee. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

September 11, 2011 at 4:24 PM

Congrats Lee...this is very nice..

Sara Kendrick

September 11, 2011 at 3:28 PM

Congrats to the knowledgable writer...Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure

September 11, 2011 at 2:58 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!!!!---Lori

David Williams

September 11, 2011 at 5:00 AM

hey Lee congrats on your great harmonious win..David

Lee Ramage

September 11, 2011 at 12:03 PM

Thanks so much. Lee

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 10, 2011 at 11:37 PM

Congrats Lee on your sweet success with this brilliant beauty.. most all of us had issues with this form..tricky and misleading when first read to coordinate the lines.. sometimes shorter forms are harder to create for than the longer ones.. I am a Rhyme girl..so I can ramble on..haha..

Lee Ramage

September 10, 2011 at 11:49 PM

Thanks so much Linda- Marie. I didn't have problem with a Cinquain, I won using this form before. It was the combination of the two types that I found confusing and the instructions just... well it doesn't matter now. Just frustrating when you spend so much time on something. Thanks Lee

Cyndi Macmillan

September 10, 2011 at 1:44 PM

Line 1 has one word (the title). Line 2 has two words that describe the title. Line 3 has three words that tell the action. Line 4 has four words that express the feeling Line 5 has one word which recalls the title.

Lee Ramage

September 10, 2011 at 1:56 PM

Me again, just re-read PS and it outlines two Cinquains and if you check blog Nette said she wanted 1 line= one word- 2 syllables 2nd line = two words- 4 syllables etc... so it was a combo of both, guess I just misunderstood. Lee

Lee Ramage

September 10, 2011 at 1:53 PM

Oh, I am so confused as i used the instructions from Poetry Soup then i read the blog and there was utter chaos. So I will leave as is and if I lose due to form, so be it. Have a look at the blog as there are more ways than one to write it... You are probably correct but I spent a long time on it and leaving for a few days now. Thanks for the heads up. Lee

Cyndi Macmillan

September 10, 2011 at 1:37 PM

I kiss my fingertips MmmmmmmAW!!! and then open my hand to you! Great work, Lee. Heads up: I think the title is supposed to be pulled from the first line in the cinquain AND not capitalized. I might be getting this mixed up with another contest. Let me check!

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