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Musical Interlude

Music plays
Body sways

Feel the beat
Tap those feet

Pleasant mood
Interlude

Back to work
Mustn't shirk

Garden first
Flowers thirst

Tackle weeds
Scatter seeds

Feed the fish
Bodies swish

Mow the lawn
With a yawn

Roses pruned
Nose perfumed

Time to pause
Go indoors

Cup of tea
Gladdens me

Hear the news
Get the blues

Switch to song
Sing along

Spirits raised
God be praised!

16.09.20


Threes, Please Poetry Contest -sponsored by Beth Evans

Copyright © Wendy Watson | Year Posted 2020

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Kim Merryman Date: 1/17/2022 2:30:00 PM I like the upbeat, staccato rhythm in your poem, Wendy! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/16/2022 1:44:00 PM I have read your winner and was delighted it was on the winners' list. Congrats. Sara Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 1/16/2022 1:46:00 PM What a lovely comment to receive,Sara. The rhythmic pattern to this poetic form appeals to my musicality and doesn't take too long to compose!

Christuraj Alex Date: 1/16/2022 6:47:00 AM Great footles rhyming beautifully well. Very interesting as well. Congratulations! Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 1/16/2022 8:22:00 AM I haven't been on this site for ages and had forgotten how ovely it is to receive positive feedback. thank you, Christuraj.

Kim Merryman Date: 4/24/2021 3:34:00 PM Wendy, this is a nice sequence of footles! These are fun! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 1/16/2022 8:21:00 AM Thank you so much Kim for taking the time to 'drop by' with this encouraging comment.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/23/2021 11:12:00 AM I am getting to really love this form Wendy. What an excellent example your poem provides of this form. A little masterpiece this is! Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 1/15/2022 3:53:00 AM Thank you, Connie. The form was new to me but I like the snappy rhythmic progression it provides.

Hilo Poet Date: 4/22/2021 11:02:00 PM A jaunty feel in just a few words, Wendy, nicely done and my compliments for your rhyme in Brian's contest mon amie, Aloha! Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 1/15/2022 3:51:00 AM Many thanks,William for your encouraging feedback.

John Watt Date: 10/14/2020 12:17:00 PM Wendy, another congrats for your win with this lovely poetic waltz ~ John Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 4/22/2021 6:16:00 AM That's kind of you,John. I'd never heard of a footle before but they've been fun to write.

Janice Canerdy Date: 10/13/2020 6:25:00 PM CONGRATS on your win with this great poem, Wendy. Janice Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 4/22/2021 6:15:00 AM Thank you so much,Janice.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/13/2020 1:59:00 PM This is so melodic Wendy. Just lovely! Congratulations on the win! Linda Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 4/22/2021 6:14:00 AM That's much appreciated. thank you,Linda.

Eve Roper Date: 9/20/2020 7:40:00 PM Wendy, congratulations on your win. Hugs eve Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 10/13/2020 12:49:00 PM Thank you, Eve. Music always improves the day!

John Watt Date: 9/19/2020 7:42:00 PM Your poems always sing, Wendy, but never more than here. A day is just better with music, isn't it? A waltz in three beautifully composed and played, and congrats for your win! ~ John Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 10/13/2020 12:48:00 PM That's kind of you, John. I can't help being uplifted by music!

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 9/17/2020 4:06:00 AM superb trisyllabic rhyming...beautiful to read Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 9/17/2020 1:26:00 PM That’s very kind, Mahtab. Much easier for me to rhyme than tackle free verse!

Sam Kauffman Date: 9/16/2020 4:38:00 PM A story that all of us relate to in three syllable lines! Well told, Wendy. As a musician I especially love your musical references and the ways we all get distracted. Sending you peace and prayers! Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 9/17/2020 1:25:00 PM Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave this positive comment,Sam. I can’t hear music without a bodily reaction!