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Musical Interlude

Music plays Body sways Feel the beat Tap those feet Pleasant mood Interlude Back to work Mustn't shirk Garden first Flowers thirst Tackle weeds Scatter seeds Feed the fish Bodies swish Mow the lawn With a yawn Roses pruned Nose perfumed Time to pause Go indoors Cup of tea Gladdens me Hear the news Get the blues Switch to song Sing along Spirits raised God be praised! 16.09.20 Threes, Please Poetry Contest -sponsored by Beth Evans

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Date: 1/17/2022 2:30:00 PM
I like the upbeat, staccato rhythm in your poem, Wendy! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/16/2022 1:44:00 PM
I have read your winner and was delighted it was on the winners' list. Congrats. Sara
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/16/2022 1:46:00 PM
What a lovely comment to receive,Sara. The rhythmic pattern to this poetic form appeals to my musicality and doesn't take too long to compose!
Date: 1/16/2022 6:47:00 AM
Great footles rhyming beautifully well. Very interesting as well. Congratulations!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/16/2022 8:22:00 AM
I haven't been on this site for ages and had forgotten how ovely it is to receive positive feedback. thank you, Christuraj.
Date: 4/24/2021 3:34:00 PM
Wendy, this is a nice sequence of footles! These are fun! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/16/2022 8:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim for taking the time to 'drop by' with this encouraging comment.
Date: 4/23/2021 11:12:00 AM
I am getting to really love this form Wendy. What an excellent example your poem provides of this form. A little masterpiece this is! Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings xxoo
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/15/2022 3:53:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. The form was new to me but I like the snappy rhythmic progression it provides.
Date: 4/22/2021 11:02:00 PM
A jaunty feel in just a few words, Wendy, nicely done and my compliments for your rhyme in Brian's contest mon amie, Aloha!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/15/2022 3:51:00 AM
Many thanks,William for your encouraging feedback.
Date: 10/14/2020 12:17:00 PM
Wendy, another congrats for your win with this lovely poetic waltz ~ John
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/22/2021 6:16:00 AM
That's kind of you,John. I'd never heard of a footle before but they've been fun to write.
Date: 10/13/2020 6:25:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win with this great poem, Wendy. Janice
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/22/2021 6:15:00 AM
Thank you so much,Janice.
Date: 10/13/2020 1:59:00 PM
This is so melodic Wendy. Just lovely! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/22/2021 6:14:00 AM
That's much appreciated. thank you,Linda.
Date: 9/20/2020 7:40:00 PM
Wendy, congratulations on your win. Hugs eve
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/13/2020 12:49:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. Music always improves the day!
Date: 9/19/2020 7:42:00 PM
Your poems always sing, Wendy, but never more than here. A day is just better with music, isn't it? A waltz in three beautifully composed and played, and congrats for your win! ~ John
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/13/2020 12:48:00 PM
That's kind of you, John. I can't help being uplifted by music!
Date: 9/17/2020 4:06:00 AM
superb trisyllabic rhyming...beautiful to read
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Wendy Watson
Date: 9/17/2020 1:26:00 PM
That’s very kind, Mahtab. Much easier for me to rhyme than tackle free verse!
Date: 9/16/2020 4:38:00 PM
A story that all of us relate to in three syllable lines! Well told, Wendy. As a musician I especially love your musical references and the ways we all get distracted. Sending you peace and prayers!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 9/17/2020 1:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave this positive comment,Sam. I can’t hear music without a bodily reaction!

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