Nette Onclaud Poet Haiku

Musical Haiku Notes

MUSICAL HAIKU NOTES
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       music grooves wild spell
hip hop rock thumping acid heat---
                    wind’s fingers click sleek
                                
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       rhapsody in jazz
jiggling scents of post-war blues---
                    wildflowers dizzy

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       while hand-carved flutes stroll
notes from a classic forest--- 
                    upturned grass listens
                                 
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      oh ballads moan soft
lyrics aching for lost love--- 
                    navel  of snake writhes

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       of best, church choirs pray
chanting angelic blessings---
                    white dove’s breath is touched!       

       


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CONTEST: P.D. ‘s HAIKU CRAZY
FROM: nette onclaud

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Gautami Phookan June 10, 2011 at 2:26 PM Beautiful pieces of art,,loved the music in words in your haikus, nette.. Many Congrats on your wonderful win in this contest.love, gautami

Joe Maverick June 10, 2011 at 1:03 PM Wow Nette, enjoyed the big win here and best wishes for future ones.!

Carol Sunshine Brown June 9, 2011 at 7:20 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's "Haiku~Crazy" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta June 9, 2011 at 7:19 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., nette

Joseph Osita June 9, 2011 at 5:52 AM Many congrats on your well deserved win in P.D's contest.huggs*

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 8, 2011 at 11:07 PM Really enjoyed your musical take here, nette-- loved that one about the grass ^_^ super congrats on your win with these melodic pieces :D hugs

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2011 at 9:43 PM Nette! Congratulations!!!! Thank you for the awesome haiku's and supporting my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 8, 2011 at 8:39 PM Congrats Nette luv on a super duper win in PD's contest with this musical bonanza of Haiku luv.. enjoy.. sweets///

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2011 at 8:31 PM YOurs were really rockin and I am surprised not even higher on the list! Congrats, Nette!

Joseph Osita June 7, 2011 at 3:22 PM I believe this is exactly what P.D wants from us.I'm sure this amazing write will do well in the contest. huggs***

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2011 at 6:51 AM wowie, these are splendid. I can see mine slipping lower and lower down the list as I see more and more great haiku like these being posted. I can't believe I messed up on your rules again. I am really getting old to overlook so many things. Have a nice day ,Nette. LUv, Andrea

Daver Austin June 6, 2011 at 2:08 PM Some very illusive stuff here. LOts of imagination. LOve, Dave

Gerard Keogh Jr. June 5, 2011 at 5:54 PM This one is like a plane on the runway. It simply gets airborne and takes off. You really get this right and it improves on each one as it goes along. This ids good work, my dear! Regards, Gerard.

James Fraser June 5, 2011 at 1:22 PM Terrific Haiku series Nette, exceptional write. I wish you all the best in pd's contest :) smiles 4 u

Caryl Muzzey June 5, 2011 at 11:12 AM Nette, wonderful and you're done! You on a roll, more please. I loved the serenade. Best to you in the contest~ Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire June 5, 2011 at 10:56 AM Play on, Maestro! Each verse has a different feel to it and yet they are joined by one great thing -- a universal love for music, from acid rock to spiritual hymns. Great entry for the haiku contest! Wishing you success, Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 5, 2011 at 7:38 AM well now I feel like dancing and boogying on down the road Nette luv with this fantastic eneregetic set of Haikus...thinking I might redo my entry now..after reading yours and Chris..his is awesome as well.. I predict two front runners hers luv..good luck... with luv..

Poet Tacito June 5, 2011 at 6:38 AM Oh this was straight up stunning. Nice job!!!!

Gwendolen Song June 5, 2011 at 6:28 AM This is a grooooovy, spiritual, yet jazzy haiku! This is super duper cool. Never imagined a dove's breath being white or possible to be touched! Gwendolen

Michael J. Falotico June 5, 2011 at 6:14 AM A thing of beauty!!!! an array of music that soothes the soul ...Excellent entry!!! always Michael

Kash Poet June 5, 2011 at 2:41 AM A full 7 for you!!!!

Kash Poet June 5, 2011 at 2:40 AM WOW Nette!!I think these are among the best string Haikus I have ever read.Just excellent.Best wishes..