Music On a Summer Breeze

Through the highlands, you can hear the pipes drone. Every note, riding on a crisp, morning breeze. In-between, the piped notes; you hear the drum beats. I go to bed each night, completely beat. But, I’m often kept awake by the cricket songs and bullfrog drones. Though the stream’s not close; their music’s carried on a breeze. I do wish falling asleep, despite their music, were a breeze. Old bullfrog won’t stop his throaty beats. His voice, like the pipes, a loud, baritone drone. Droning notes on a summer breeze, need good timing like drum beats.
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Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 8:02 PM
oh I so rarely see a tritina and yours is SO well composed. Awesome write!!
Kiser Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Thanks Andrea, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I enjoy writing them; I think I enjoy the challenge it presents; it's like working a puzzle.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 12:42 PM
The beats of the music in your write adorned your work of art.. Lovely and beautifully composed.. I enjoyed reading.. keep shining M.L. Kiser. Be blessed always.
Kiser Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 5:18 PM
Thank you so much, Besma; your comments are always so wonderful; you do love poetry and that is very clear. I am glad that you enjoyed it.
One Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 4:41 AM
This is lovely writing... I like the expressions in your lines..
Kiser Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 5:08 AM
Thanks so much; I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
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