Poetprentice Dupins Poet Free verse

Music

Music

Make sounds cause heads to jam
Mood setter make beds bam
More demands drown out mom
Models on runway glam
Motivates in the gym
Mick Jagger David’s psalm
Music is my poem




Written April 19, 2017

Pleiades M 

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Mark Martin May 1, 2017 at 12:43 AM Great poem about how music affects our lives. Especially like the second line! Congratulations Poetprentice! :-)

Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2017 at 6:54 AM Nice one! Congrats, PoetPrentice! Poetprentice Dupins April 25, 2017 at 9:52 AM Thanks, Kim.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2017 at 1:54 PM - Congratulations on your winning poem, P.P.D. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Poetprentice Dupins April 23, 2017 at 9:56 PM Thank you, Sunshine.

Agnes Krampe April 23, 2017 at 7:50 AM Coming back with congrats. Poetprentice Dupins April 23, 2017 at 9:12 AM Thanks!

Chuck Melugin April 22, 2017 at 1:19 PM PoetPrentice, Your music brims between the M's! a7, My best to you, chuck Poetprentice Dupins April 23, 2017 at 1:34 AM Thanks!

Charlie Smith April 20, 2017 at 1:53 PM Wow! Try an easy form, why don't you? Excellent entry PoetPrentice, best wishes... Poetprentice Dupins April 20, 2017 at 2:17 PM Thanks, Charlie.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2017 at 8:22 AM - Very well done, a great pleiades P.P.D. - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Poetprentice Dupins April 20, 2017 at 2:18 PM Thank you, Sunshine.

Elizabeth Kinch April 20, 2017 at 1:43 AM Clever, another form I will one day attempt, although I fear it is more difficult than you have made this look. #7 Poetprentice Dupins April 20, 2017 at 7:49 AM Thanks Elizabeth!

Agnes Krampe April 19, 2017 at 9:50 PM Nicely done, with the M's on both ends - I have never thought of that. Poetprentice Dupins April 20, 2017 at 12:09 AM Thanks!