Music

MUSIC walking one night i heard the same dirty sax i hated when she walked out on me at club sleezy fiddling unafraid on fifth avenue for experience the whores pickpockets walking by taking a bite of the big apple sam at the steinway grand cocktail music for love or misery or both one hundred on stage at the philharmonic the audience rich and poor alike fused as one by ravel Dave Austin

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James Peranteau

Date: 3/19/2015 12:02:00 AM

Like an ol' Triumph I am dear poet, who you just gave one hell-of-a-kickstart ! For a minute there Daver, I felt like I was toooo old to venture out to the groping world and extol in the marvels of the art world....Thanx my friend....great write sir...have a blessed one, you and yours.....much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2015 4:53:00 AM

The sights and sounds of New York City come to life vividly in your descriptions, Daver. (If a lady walks out on you at "Club Sleezy, you really won't miss her :D ) Sending big hugs for this entertaining poem. Love, Carolyn

Skat A

Date: 3/14/2015 8:32:00 PM

Music makes me sad, Daver. It's also the most relaxing sound. Makes me want to go to a concert and pickpocket all the folks not paying attention. LOL. JK..... I enjoyed the first one the most. HUGS...SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2015 7:16:00 PM

Hi, Daver. So nice seeing you today. Is spring come your way yet?

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/14/2015 12:09:00 PM

enjoyed the many moods and layers of music's wonder, daver... great strings of tanka.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2015 10:50:00 PM

Yes, I liked your first one's pivot too, my friend!!

Daver Austin
Date: 3/14/2015 10:26:00 AM

I'm busy helping my wife with her music recitals, but will post again soon. Love, daver

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/11/2015 4:13:00 PM

A really strong showing of the gritty side of the streets and life here also the transcending dimension of appreciation that plays its part in the renewing of hope good Daver..'

Daver Austin
Date: 3/14/2015 10:25:00 AM

I'm busy helping my wife with her music recitals. Be back soon. Love, daver

Monterey Sirak

Date: 3/7/2015 7:00:00 AM

You never cease to amaze me, Daver, at the way you tell expansive stories, open up whole worlds in a few words with your tankas.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2015 5:57:00 PM

They were fun to read. The second one for me was best example of tanka.Also the last one, great job!!

Daver Austin
Date: 3/6/2015 10:56:00 AM

Thanks for the read, buddy. I like the pivot on the first one. As for tanka quality I've no idea. Big love, daver

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/5/2015 1:31:00 PM

an array of savory tanka flavored with true wit.. you amaze, daver.. huggs

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/5/2015 12:03:00 PM

Very imaginative, powerful and full of truisms. It says a lot and yet doesn’t dwell on the obvious. Emile. #7