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Valentines night Dad's step on the porch in the dark, passing the windows we look up from our work he has an extra case what? what is in it? Dad is swarmed with paper hearts sticky glue and candy sayings hugs and kisses dinner then he quietly goes back into the hall and brings to his oldest a shiny case oh her heart beats hard and she flips the locks for she knows... her own violin scent of wood endless possibility of music * for rachel

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Date: 9/29/2009 1:48:00 PM
What a wonderful Valentine's Day gift, Veronica! It will bring Rachel joy throughout her life. Love the way you built suspense. Of course, I was thinking candy and flowers, but Dad had something even better in mind. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 8:23:00 AM
What a sweet memory! Lovely poem! ~ Carrie
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