Music

Melodies remain Uncontained by time's goodbyes Songbook of refrain Immersed with dim, nimbus eyes Chorus chords immortalized 5-19-2021 TANKACROSTIC Poetry Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich (The contest filled before I could enter.)

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Fj Thomas

Date: 7/26/2022 7:07:00 AM

Well this is perfect. I do hope you placed! If no, not a biggie. Doesn't make it any less awesome ;)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 6/4/2021 1:23:00 PM

Superb! Still in a winner in our estimation. Word choice grabs the reader's attention with its originality. Best wishes, Brian

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/22/2021 8:07:00 PM

Yes! -- 'Uncontained by time's goodbyes' -- love that second line. Nice use of the tanka form. Let the music play on! ~ gw

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2021 11:30:00 AM

Oh, too bad the contest filled. This is one of the finest poems in tanka form I've ever read. A fave for me, Juliet! Best wishes, Carolyn

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/19/2021 10:23:00 AM

You summed up music well Julie, short poems always fill up quickly, ive missed many a deadline. Tom