Music

It's a growing competition 
that I feel I need to be in 
Always competing for the top
the one with the most knowledge
I wish I didn't have to feel this way

When music combines
it creates wonders
do I really want to be the one standing alone?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mcdermin Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 3:39 PM
Thank you Carrie I feel a lot better now. I play piano and violin, and teach those two as well. I also have a guitar and flute that I want to learn how to play. I can also sing.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 10, 2008 at 12:47 PM
Nothing wrong with being at the top. I'm a music nut since the late 50's, still collect CD's and still blast the living hell out of my stereo. Go for it!! Vince
Richards Avatar
October 9, 2008 at 8:02 AM
Ignore the comment below...(she feels a need to be rude,... :( ( poor thing). .......Moving on.....you wrote an interesting little poem. I think a lot of us enjoy playing, competing..but not always easy to be singled out, standing alone! As a music lover,I'd love to know what instrument you play?? Bet you are great! ~ Carrie
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