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mushrooms

mushrooms explode 'pon
felled willow stump after rain....
pink lilies appear

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Howard Kerr

April 2, 2026 at 12:01 AM

The imagery in this piece is beyond compare, Sara. It conveys vivid detail in a strict poetry form with a strict syllable count. Excellent narrative, Howard

Sara Kendrick

April 2, 2026 at 4:45 AM

Thank you, Howard. Looking back, I noticed I used the word rain twice and that needs to be corrected. I am delighted that you chose one from several years back to remind me of that time. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

May 30, 2022 at 4:29 PM

Great imagery!

Sara Kendrick

May 31, 2022 at 7:51 AM

Thank you, Kim. S.K.

M. L. Kiser

May 30, 2022 at 3:02 PM

This is rather beautiful imagery, well crafted haiku.

Sara Kendrick

May 31, 2022 at 7:51 AM

Thank you, M.L. Glad that you liked it. Sara

Judy Ball

May 29, 2022 at 10:41 PM

Oh I do love the way such a iny little thing can add so much to a dish. Well done. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

May 31, 2022 at 8:14 AM

Judy, I do add mushrooms to dishes but only the bought kind which are supposed to be safe. Sara

Tom Cunningham

May 29, 2022 at 1:34 AM

Love them Sara they sprout up so quick, bit of butter and fried, yum. Tom

Sara Kendrick

May 31, 2022 at 8:12 AM

Tom, I don't know which are good and which are poisonous, so I best leave them alone. Sara

Bill Baker

May 29, 2022 at 12:01 AM

Excellent imagery, Sara. Nice Haiku Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Sara Kendrick

May 31, 2022 at 8:10 AM

Thank you, Bill. I appreciate the visit. Sara..I need all the blessings I can get.

Harry Horsman

May 28, 2022 at 10:12 PM

Love this Sara, yes so visual.

Sara Kendrick

May 31, 2022 at 8:08 AM

Thank you, Harry. SK.

Sotto Poet

May 28, 2022 at 8:33 AM

Great Haiku, Sara. You did a wonderful job of conveying images, not just in the haiku but also in the picture.

Sara Kendrick

May 28, 2022 at 11:41 AM

Thank you, Sotto. I appreciate the kind review. Your visits are always appreciated. Sara

Jenna Logan

May 28, 2022 at 6:14 AM

and how quickly they grow. A fine Haiku, Sara.

Sara Kendrick

May 28, 2022 at 11:40 AM

Jenna, It seems they spring up overnight. I noticed them because they were growing on the weeping willow stump that we had to take down because it was dying and a threat to our house. Thanks for the visit. Sara