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Muses In Gold

To glide with inspiration above quilted clouds Where birds so often soar Glimpse a sunset hued in gold With many colors to adore To grasp the muse that swing from creative vines And sway from abstract thoughts Upon the page release the lines Which meander within the plots Clasp the quill as the ink flows And carefully craft each verse Clutch the metaphors in rhyme or prose As throughout the page they intersperse Sometimes the ending can hold a surprise And cause a gasp in its trail The words flow subtly and with guise Its meaning you then inhale 6-28-2021 Writing Prompt Grasp - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Smita Kulkarni

Date: 7/28/2021 1:29:00 PM

Very stylish and graceful use of words Joseph!! What a wonderful imagery you have!

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 7/25/2021 1:59:00 AM

Very beautiful, such elegant flow and so scenic to the senses. 'To glide with inspiration above quilted clouds, Where birds so often soar' Your words have painted such amazing beauty through your pen! My heart soars in it's reading. A favorite without a single doubt.

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/24/2021 5:11:00 PM

Dear Joseph, your use of the required words has produced a smooth, silky poetic weave of amazing imagery where my imagination can glide with your inspiration. Congratulations for your win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/20/2021 3:12:00 PM

Back to say Congrats for #5 on the best new poem list :)

Juliet Ligon

Date: 7/19/2021 2:18:00 PM

Wonderful construction from the required words. This flows in a musical quality.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2021 11:35:00 AM

I kept thinking of this one. Gotta come back and fave it. I still don't know how this one even got past me before today.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2021 10:17:00 AM

wow, definitely one of the best I've seen in the contest. No wonder I see it also got POTD. Way to go, and congratulations.

Constance La France

Date: 7/16/2021 10:57:00 AM

Joseph, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Prompt - Grasp - Challenge and on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with this write! I am so proud to have inspired this beautifully penned poem and your use of the required words is excellent ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/14/2021 6:44:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/14/2021 8:44:00 AM

I must admit I inhaled your poem, so perfectly done, congrats, my talented friend. :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/12/2021 9:34:00 AM

"Quilted clouds," "swing from creative vines," "clutch the metaphors" these are truly inspired, and singularly creative, images Joseph that bring about a "gasp" of admiration for their ingenuity! Congratulations to you and your muse! A fav for me!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/12/2021 6:57:00 AM

Sometimes the ending can hold a surprise And cause a gasp in its trail Beautifully Written. Congratulations!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/9/2021 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations on POTW with this stunning poem. Brilliant use of the required words which glided gently from your pen! BW ~ Mala

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/6/2021 8:18:00 AM

Congrats on POTW, with this outstanding write, Joseph!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/4/2021 8:51:00 PM

The moment I read these words from your golden pen, I knew they would shine brighter than the sun. Congratulations Joseph, on Poem of the Week. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/4/2021 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTW win. What a creative write. Your pen was working over time on this one. Enjoy your day/week/win with blessings............