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Muse Waxing

O 
Heat!
Discord!
My mind splayed
As un-private pools  
Drifting full of littered life bits
Turned upward toward the sun, to develop naturally
Then evaporating back into my head as new thoughts, waiting for a finer point.

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entered in Matt Caliri's Contest "The Contest of New Terrains"

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Donna Golden

Date: 10/11/2009 10:51:00 PM

Wonderful piece, Sandra! Hope to see you back on the Soup soon! Hugs, Donna

John Freeman

Date: 8/15/2009 11:50:00 AM

Witty job, I trust you are in school and busy now, I start 8-17-09, myself. Sincerely Moses

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/13/2009 1:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in this contest.

Brian Strand

Date: 8/12/2009 12:27:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Sandra.Rgds Brian

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/11/2009 1:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your high win. Love, joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/11/2009 8:11:00 AM

Congratulations, Sandra!! A well deserved winning poem!! ~ Carrie

Krista Kurth

Date: 8/11/2009 6:37:00 AM

Sandra, congratulations on 3rd place! I really like the images in the poem as well as the form. You did a great job. Krista

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/11/2009 5:11:00 AM

Contratulations, Sandra, for winning 3nd place in the New Terrains Contest. It is a well deserved win. Sincerely, Dane Smith-Johnsen

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/10/2009 11:18:00 PM

Sandra congrats on placing third in Matt's contest - God Bless, MJ

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 8/10/2009 10:19:00 PM

Well done, congratulations! Trudy

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/10/2009 9:10:00 PM

Congrats on your placement! Definitely great since this is your first of writing this form C:

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/22/2009 2:58:00 PM

(part two) just then the clouds moved away and the moon was full. her friend gave a growl and fell down on all fours. jhl

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/22/2009 2:57:00 PM

(part one) A woman looked in the palm of her hand and strangly saw a pentagram. at first she thought it was dirt. but when she tried to wash it off, no soap would work. she asked a freind, a familar face. what's the meaning of this abnormality? her friend with a look of shock; said "get that disease away from me!" latter that evening she went to his house demanding an apology why was he such a louse.he said to her a pentagram is a sign for the victom of a werewolf.

Sami Al-Khalili

Date: 7/22/2009 2:46:00 PM

heyy!! MAIL!

Date: 7/21/2009 1:02:00 PM

Wonderful title! Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a nice day! Karen