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Where did she go- she left me in a spin, with words disjointed- where do I begin? She took my thoughts held tight within her arms, and now I fear I'm left without her charms. My missing thoughts and words in pieces lay; without a plan, they'll stay in disarray. Where did she go, that artist of my soul? Without her lead- no thoughts, no words, no goal. My muse is on the loose- oh help me, please! She's gone for good- or is this just a tease? My muse is on the loose, what happens now? I'm crushed, forsaken- this I can't allow. I looked into the den where books are kept; high up, upon the shelves, and then I crept down cellar stairs among the antiques there- returning to the second-story stair. I looked in every corner, neath the bed; no sign of her, but then I soon was led up to the attic by its window view- entranced, she sat, and that is when I knew. My muse was on the loose to find new scenes, and now beside her, inspiration streams. The vision of the mountains, valleys, sky- so beautiful it made me gasp and sigh. Together we sat weaving thoughts and words while hearing the sweet lullaby of birds. I learned a poet's muse must be set free- sometimes to find new views successfully. September 4, 2016 ~2nd Place~ Contest: When There Is No Inspiration Sponsor: Silent One Judged: 10/08/2020 ~3rd Place~ Contest: Strand Select 5 Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 01/07/2020 ~2nd Place~ Premiere Contest: Muse On The Loose Sponsor: John Lawless Judged: 09/12/2016 (Iambic Pentameter in Couplets)

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Date: 10/8/2020 10:51:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/8/2020 7:53:00 AM
Great take on the contest Sandra.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/7/2020 9:47:00 PM
Just gorgeous! Sincere congratulations for your win in Brian's contest, Sandra - keep the ink flowing, my friend, and best wishes for a bountiful and healthy New Year. Blessings! :o) <3
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Date: 1/12/2020 3:11:00 PM
Thanks again, Greg, for stopping by to read my poem and leaving your positive comments! I appreciate them so much. Sandra :)
Date: 1/7/2020 7:00:00 PM
Hi Sandra, What a wonderful poem. A muse on the loose is what we all fear but all welcome back! Thank you for this delightful, whimsical expose! Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 9/13/2016 9:36:00 AM
Perfectly crafted!
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Date: 9/12/2016 11:24:00 PM
Enjoyed reading it very much, especially the last stanza. Congrats on your win, Sandra.
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Date: 9/12/2016 10:18:00 PM
Mrs Sandra, I am back to say congratulations on your winning write. I knew it was brilliant the first time I read it:)
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Date: 9/12/2016 2:37:00 PM
Congrats, Sandra! Your muse was indeed set free when you created this lovely poem. I especially enjoyed the last stanza. Kathy
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Date: 9/12/2016 5:37:00 PM
Thank you, Kathleen! Love your uplifting comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/12/2016 1:52:00 PM
What a great poem! Congrats on your win, Sandra. Janice
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Date: 9/12/2016 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/12/2016 1:35:00 PM
This is the kind of poetry I so admire and love reading Sandra! A first place poem for me! Congratulations on your deserving wIn! 7 : )
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Date: 9/12/2016 5:37:00 PM
Thank you again, Connie! I appreciate your kind comments, congrats and 7! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/12/2016 10:13:00 AM
sweet Sandra! beautiful and wonderful flow you always carry such the perfect flow...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/12/2016 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, for your uplifting comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/12/2016 9:13:00 AM
Sandra, such easy flow and smooth gentle rhymes. So many times the Muse must leave us a trail of breadcrumbs to follow. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 9/12/2016 5:35:00 PM
Another great contest, John! Thank you so much for my fine placement! Sandra
Date: 9/9/2016 4:03:00 AM
The poem wonderfully maintains its lofty theme and form. Really good, Sandra.
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Date: 9/12/2016 5:35:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by with your nice comment, Sarban! Sandra
Date: 9/6/2016 2:16:00 PM
I just love this beautiful poem and admire the form you gently and totally conquered ... CayCay
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Date: 9/12/2016 5:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, CayCay. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/6/2016 1:48:00 PM
Wonderful, Sandra. This should do very well in the contest - good luck! Agnes
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Date: 9/12/2016 5:34:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/6/2016 3:20:00 AM
Aha!! A winner in my eyes:) Such lovely poetry, am glad I stopped by:) a fave:)
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Date: 9/12/2016 5:34:00 PM
Thank you, Jo. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/4/2016 6:23:00 PM
Your muse didn't go anywhere, Sandra. That, is a lie! Great poem to learn the da dum da dum da dum da dum da dum, Iambic Pentameter beat.... :-)
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Date: 9/5/2016 2:31:00 PM
Ha Ha, Tom! Thanks for the visit and supportive words! Sandra
Date: 9/4/2016 2:07:00 PM
Sweet Sandra, just beautiful! good luck it will do well, I'm sure! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/5/2016 2:30:00 PM
Thank you, Laura! It was a fun write. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/4/2016 1:35:00 PM
Oh Mrs Sandra I really love this one. It's fun, wise and did I say fun? I'll have to save this one. A7 and a fav:):)
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Date: 9/5/2016 2:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel, for the uplifting comments and wonderful 7 plus fav! I am pleased that you like it. Sandra
Date: 9/4/2016 1:21:00 PM
Such wise words at the end Sandra - my muse goes on extended holidays I just welcome her back and would never force her to return home early or I wouldn't be happy with my poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/5/2016 2:29:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Not too sure if this is what John's looking for, but my 'muse' led me there! Hugs, Sandra

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