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Muse On the Loose


Where did she go- she left me in a spin,
     with words disjointed- where do I begin?
She took my thoughts held tight within her arms,
     and now I fear I'm left without her charms.

My missing thoughts and words in pieces lay;
     without a plan, they'll stay in disarray.
Where did she go, that artist of my soul?
     Without her lead- no thoughts, no words, no goal.

My muse is on the loose- oh help me, please!
     She's gone for good- or is this just a tease?
My muse is on the loose, what happens now?
     I'm crushed, forsaken- this I can't allow.

I looked into the den where books are kept;
     high up, upon the shelves, and then I crept
down cellar stairs among the antiques there-
     returning to the second-story stair.

I looked in every corner, neath the bed;
     no sign of her, but then I soon was led
up to the attic by its window view-
     entranced, she sat, and that is when I knew.

My muse was on the loose to find new scenes,
     and now beside her, inspiration streams.
The vision of the mountains, valleys, sky-
     so beautiful it made me gasp and sigh.

Together we sat weaving thoughts and words
     while hearing the sweet lullaby of birds.
I learned a poet's muse must be set free-
     sometimes to find new views successfully.


September 4, 2016

~2nd Place~
Contest: When There Is No Inspiration
Sponsor: Silent One
Judged: 10/08/2020

~3rd Place~
Contest: Strand Select 5
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 01/07/2020

~2nd Place~
Premiere Contest: Muse On The Loose
Sponsor: John Lawless
Judged: 09/12/2016

(Iambic Pentameter in Couplets)
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Andresen Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 10:51 AM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 7:53 AM
Great take on the contest Sandra.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Barden Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 9:47 PM
Just gorgeous! Sincere congratulations for your win in Brian's contest, Sandra - keep the ink flowing, my friend, and best wishes for a bountiful and healthy New Year. Blessings! :o) <3
Haight Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 3:11 PM
Thanks again, Greg, for stopping by to read my poem and leaving your positive comments! I appreciate them so much. Sandra :)
Kauffman Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 7:00 PM
Hi Sandra, What a wonderful poem. A muse on the loose is what we all fear but all welcome back! Thank you for this delightful, whimsical expose! Congratulations on your placement.
Singh Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Perfectly crafted!
Nusker Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 11:24 PM
Enjoyed reading it very much, especially the last stanza. Congrats on your win, Sandra.
Turner Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 10:18 PM
Mrs Sandra, I am back to say congratulations on your winning write. I knew it was brilliant the first time I read it:)
Kroll Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 2:37 PM
Congrats, Sandra! Your muse was indeed set free when you created this lovely poem. I especially enjoyed the last stanza. Kathy
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, Kathleen! Love your uplifting comment! Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 1:52 PM
What a great poem! Congrats on your win, Sandra. Janice
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 5:37 PM
Thank you so much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 1:35 PM
This is the kind of poetry I so admire and love reading Sandra! A first place poem for me! Congratulations on your deserving wIn! 7 : )
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 5:37 PM
Thank you again, Connie! I appreciate your kind comments, congrats and 7! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 10:13 AM
sweet Sandra! beautiful and wonderful flow you always carry such the perfect flow...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 5:36 PM
Thank you, Laura, for your uplifting comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Sandra, such easy flow and smooth gentle rhymes. So many times the Muse must leave us a trail of breadcrumbs to follow. Thanks for participating in the contest
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 5:35 PM
Another great contest, John! Thank you so much for my fine placement! Sandra
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 4:03 AM
The poem wonderfully maintains its lofty theme and form. Really good, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 5:35 PM
Thank you for stopping by with your nice comment, Sarban! Sandra
Godwin Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 2:16 PM
I just love this beautiful poem and admire the form you gently and totally conquered ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Thank you so much, CayCay. Hugs, Sandra
Krampe Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 1:48 PM
Wonderful, Sandra. This should do very well in the contest - good luck! Agnes
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Thank you, Agnes. Hugs, Sandra
Daniel Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 3:20 AM
Aha!! A winner in my eyes:) Such lovely poetry, am glad I stopped by:) a fave:)
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Thank you, Jo. Hugs, Sandra
Arnone Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Your muse didn't go anywhere, Sandra. That, is a lie! Great poem to learn the da dum da dum da dum da dum da dum, Iambic Pentameter beat.... :-)
Haight Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Ha Ha, Tom! Thanks for the visit and supportive words! Sandra
Scars Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 2:07 PM
Sweet Sandra, just beautiful! good luck it will do well, I'm sure! :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Thank you, Laura! It was a fun write. Hugs, Sandra
Turner Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 1:35 PM
Oh Mrs Sandra I really love this one. It's fun, wise and did I say fun? I'll have to save this one. A7 and a fav:):)
Haight Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel, for the uplifting comments and wonderful 7 plus fav! I am pleased that you like it. Sandra
Allison Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 1:21 PM
Such wise words at the end Sandra - my muse goes on extended holidays I just welcome her back and would never force her to return home early or I wouldn't be happy with my poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Thank you, Jan. Not too sure if this is what John's looking for, but my 'muse' led me there! Hugs, Sandra
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