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Muse Deconstruction

I CHISEL AND HAMMER ON THIS WALL OF BRICKS POUND AND PUMMEL JUST TO GET TO YOU WHEN THE BRICK HAS CRUMBLED I FIND A WALL OF GLASS THAT SURROUNDS YOU LIKE A CAGE I CAN SEE IN BUT YOU CAN'T SEE OUT SILENCED BY FRUSTRATION I SIT AND CONTEMPLATE YOU IN YOUR SHELL I FIND TIME HAS LOST ITS MEANING I CAN STARE FOREVER INTO YOUR ABYSS.

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Date: 5/13/2018 8:47:00 PM
Reminds me a lot of poetry I wrote when I was younger. I especially like the last two lines as they really made me FEEL when I read them. Overall, the theme and imagery is quite nice. Very unique overall as a poem. A nice read that can make me relate to your frustration and be fascinated by the last few lines.
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Tiffany Harvester
Date: 5/14/2018 2:16:00 AM
Thank you, friend. This is pretty old actually. I'm working on some newer ones. So glad you like it.

Book: Shattered Sighs