Muse

Close your eyes,
take a slow sweet breath...
let it carry you away.

Sink into your senses,
as the rain beats down...
cold crisp invigorating.

Come closer tip to tip,
hand to hand...
let the embrace take you.

Heart to heart,
syncing to a steady rhythm...
one moment; lost to space and time.

Revel within that moment,
clarity of the deepest mysteries...
dawning as if seeing, hearing, feeling;
for the first time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Loving Iii Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 7:03 PM
look for it! thats what i say. congrads. john
Reslink Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 1:24 PM
thank you !:)
Green Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 4:41 PM
I love the imagery and the way this piece rolls of the tongue just beautifully. Great job!
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March 20, 2014 at 1:24 PM
Thank you:) glad you enjoyed it!
Mehta Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 5:09 AM
Very inspirational write. Congrats on the fine win, amanda
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March 20, 2014 at 1:23 PM
Thank you very much!
Smith Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 5:06 PM
This is nice Amanda..Let the embrace take you is perfect......Tim
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March 20, 2014 at 1:22 PM
thank you...it's what I think of when I think of a muse... family, friends, that someone special:)
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