Get Your Premium Membership

Muse

Close your eyes, take a slow sweet breath... let it carry you away. Sink into your senses, as the rain beats down... cold crisp invigorating. Come closer tip to tip, hand to hand... let the embrace take you. Heart to heart, syncing to a steady rhythm... one moment; lost to space and time. Revel within that moment, clarity of the deepest mysteries... dawning as if seeing, hearing, feeling; for the first time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/10/2014 7:03:00 PM
look for it! thats what i say. congrads. john
Login to Reply
Reslink Avatar
Amanda Reslink
Date: 3/20/2014 1:24:00 PM
thank you !:)
Date: 3/10/2014 4:41:00 PM
I love the imagery and the way this piece rolls of the tongue just beautifully. Great job!
Login to Reply
Reslink Avatar
Amanda Reslink
Date: 3/20/2014 1:24:00 PM
Thank you:) glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 3/10/2014 5:09:00 AM
Very inspirational write. Congrats on the fine win, amanda
Login to Reply
Reslink Avatar
Amanda Reslink
Date: 3/20/2014 1:23:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 3/4/2014 5:06:00 PM
This is nice Amanda..Let the embrace take you is perfect......Tim
Login to Reply
Reslink Avatar
Amanda Reslink
Date: 3/20/2014 1:22:00 PM
thank you...it's what I think of when I think of a muse... family, friends, that someone special:)

Book: Shattered Sighs