Muse

M ystical union:  his thoughts flow into mine
U nderstanding life: how water turns to wine
S exual tension: inner thoughts he lays bare
E lectrical charges: he sets off the flare


For Andrea's Four Letter Contest
28 August, 2013

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Paul Callus

March 16, 2020 at 3:29 PM

A short Acrostic in rhyme. You give life to your muse, Eileen; the relationship between the two of you is not just platonic...there is more to it! Hugs // paul

Poet Destroyer A

September 5, 2013 at 3:59 PM

congratulations Eileen,... xox..PD

Sara Kendrick

September 5, 2013 at 3:36 PM

Creative winning work..Enjoyed reading today..Congrats..Sara

Donna Jones

September 1, 2013 at 2:54 PM

Wow sweetie....awesome....congratulations... understanding life....wish someone would fill me in....great win.....

Skat A

September 1, 2013 at 2:04 PM

Eileen, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

Kim Merryman

September 1, 2013 at 2:03 PM

Eileen, congrats on your win with this sultry acrostic! Love, Kim

Sandra Adams

August 31, 2013 at 8:29 PM

he and you blend well together...congrats on your win! :)

Andrea Dietrich

August 31, 2013 at 5:53 PM

very nicely done, and methinks your muse is a human!! Mine is a woman who just lives in my mind! I especially loved the line on "wine!" Gorgeous, and congrats for your win.

Richard D Seal

August 29, 2013 at 5:13 PM

Great write my little Desert Orchid, you have mused well. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian

August 29, 2013 at 11:57 PM

:) Thanks, Richard...Sweet of you to visit and post. Hope it does well, but there are so many great writes out there. At least the challenge was fun!

Richard D Seal

August 29, 2013 at 5:14 PM

and good luck in the contest

Carrie Richards

August 28, 2013 at 6:41 PM

and the flare turns into fire and is an amazing poem!! :)

Eileen Manassian

August 29, 2013 at 11:58 PM

Thanks, Carrie! Sweet of you! :)

Cecilia Macfarlane

August 28, 2013 at 12:22 PM

Now that is what I call a muse! Can we clone him? LOL Awesome acrostic! Hugs

Eileen Manassian

August 30, 2013 at 12:20 AM

Wouldn't that be awesome! :) Hugs!

Poet Tacito

August 28, 2013 at 9:04 AM

Flame on!!! Nice! =D "Union", "Understanding", "Tension", "Electric"...damn right! There is no better way to live. Excellent acrostic!

Eileen Manassian

August 30, 2013 at 12:21 AM

:) DRAKE!!!!!! Please...post a new poem! I want a challenge! Thanks for the support and encouragement!!! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

August 28, 2013 at 6:58 AM

You have quite the imagination, well done.

Eileen Manassian

August 30, 2013 at 12:22 AM

I thank you kindly!

Russell Sivey

August 28, 2013 at 5:38 AM

This is a tremendous and enlightening write my friend! I love how you brought many aspects of what a muse can be, that was very ingenious on your part, and you left a lot to our imagination too, awesome! What a brilliant piece, such a grand poem, Great Work!!

Eileen Manassian

August 30, 2013 at 12:25 AM

Yes....usually muses have some sort of pull on us that goes beyond the platonic...I mean, read about painters and authors, and poets...there was this close intimacy with the muse that was beyond mere friendship. Anyway...glad you liked this write, Russell. Lovely post, and thanks for dropping by.

Poet Destroyer A

August 28, 2013 at 12:41 AM

goodnight Eileen, I'm off to bed again, stopping by to wish you luck, and leave smiles for all the muses we have in our hearts and the soup.... luv luv...linda

Eileen Manassian

August 30, 2013 at 12:20 AM

:) What a sweet endearing post! Yes...muses are wonderful! HUGS! :)

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