*NOTE subtleties emphasized in their articulate closures contain a quantum message. I think we're in trouble mate why, what's wrong I saw the pilot reading a manual was it how to land a plane in a storm no, how to fly one ???---!. there's no life preservers on this ship, mate I heard this captain say that the ship has a full complement on board so what does that mean well after the ship sinks we'll just sit tight with no life preservers there'll be plenty just wait a while give or take ... !
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