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Murmurs of the Heart

squander not my jewels - ruby lips, pink quartz cheeks, and ivory flesh

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Paige Hind

Date: 7/18/2023 11:59:00 AM

Enchanting... liked it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2023 11:18:00 AM

Thanks :)

Len Gasun

Date: 7/17/2023 7:58:00 PM

So wonderful! I love your monoku a lot. Congratulations on your first place win my dear poet friend Kim! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2023 6:17:00 AM

Thank you, Len! I appreciate you! God bless you too!

Terry Miller

Date: 7/17/2023 3:08:00 AM

Oh, I so love this monoku; congratulations.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2023 3:20:00 AM

Thank you so much, Terry!

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 7/16/2023 4:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win ....Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2023 5:35:00 AM

Thank you!

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/15/2023 9:01:00 PM

An exquisite monoku. Congratulations on your win with this unique piece. Thank you for your participation in the contest. Blessings. ^__^JCB

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2023 5:35:00 AM

Thank you, JCB!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/15/2023 12:43:00 AM

Great gems. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2023 7:08:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj!

Chris Con

Date: 7/13/2023 10:30:00 PM

Queen of Hearts.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2023 9:17:00 AM

:) Thanks for the lovely comment!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/13/2023 9:12:00 PM

Wonderful monoku, Kim, very deep and unique:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2023 9:17:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/13/2023 11:29:00 AM

-"My body is my temple" ... was my first thought, Kim - (maybe I'm misunderstanding) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2023 9:18:00 AM

I love your take on the poem! A poem goes beyond the understanding of the poet. God bless!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 7/12/2023 10:37:00 AM

Beautiful penning, Kim:-) Best of luck in the contest!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2023 4:19:00 AM

Thank you, Edward!

Valsa George

Date: 7/11/2023 11:28:00 PM

Lovely monoku..... dear Kim. Your jewels are not cast before the swine !

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2023 4:32:00 AM

What a nice comment, Valsa! I’m glad you like it! Blessings :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2023 1:06:00 PM

a wonderful interpretation of the theme, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2023 6:23:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 7/11/2023 4:58:00 AM

I second Ms. Sally on this one Kim. Perfectly penned.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2023 6:23:00 PM

Thank you, Nancy!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/10/2023 8:04:00 PM

'The Family Jewels' -- Female side of the divide!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2023 8:13:00 PM

Very true :) lol

Maria Quernel

Date: 7/10/2023 4:25:00 PM

Lovely poem, Kim !

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2023 7:11:00 PM

Thank you, Maria!

Sally Eslinger

Date: 7/10/2023 4:09:00 PM

Oh Wow! I totally didn’t expect this treasure. Marvelous, you sent all the cliches packing. I spilled my drink when i stood up to cheer! Keep’em coming! Hugs! sally

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2023 7:11:00 PM

Oh my goodness! Thank you so much, Sally! :) <3