Murmurs of My Heart

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Murmurs Of My Heart Poetry Contest, Sponsor - JCB Brul. Date: 07/10/2023

~ your dancing silhouette fades out of my dream; my heart left murmuring. ~

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Date: 7/17/2023 3:04:00 AM

oh, so wonderful, a fantastic monoku so well balanced and flowing, congratulations

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/18/2023 2:04:00 PM

Thank you very much, Terry:-)

Date: 7/16/2023 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win ...Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/16/2023 7:12:00 AM

Thank you very much, Alfonso:-)

Date: 7/15/2023 7:48:00 AM

Such a stunning imagery you painted here. Congratulations and thank you for your participation in the contest. Blessings.^__^JCB

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/15/2023 5:19:00 PM

Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, JCB:-) Most obliged.

Date: 7/15/2023 7:17:00 AM

Gorgeous write, Edward! Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/15/2023 7:21:00 AM

Thank you so much, Kim:-)

Date: 7/15/2023 12:35:00 AM

"heart left murmuring" - A very beautiful monoku. Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/15/2023 5:56:00 AM

Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)