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Murmurs of My Heart

Icy rain pounding the glass ~ like a beating drum

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Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

July 16, 2023 at 5:09 AM

Congratulations on your win ...Paula.

Paula Goldsmith

July 16, 2023 at 12:50 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my icy rain write. Have a great day writing away................

Paula Goldsmith

July 15, 2023 at 2:23 PM

"1 Place" ~ Murmurs Of My Heart~Date Written:7/6/2023

Brian Sambourne

July 15, 2023 at 12:30 PM

Very nicely written. Your simile is top notch, Paula, as you've linked 3 rumbling sounds - the heart, the rain, and the tap, tap, tapping drum. Excellent! Congratulations! Brian

Paula Goldsmith

July 16, 2023 at 12:49 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my write. I see Excellent??? Thanks, that made my day. Have a great day writing away................

Christuraj Alex

July 15, 2023 at 12:49 AM

Great scene and word painting. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

July 16, 2023 at 12:46 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my painting with words. Have a great day writing away................

Joanna Daniel

July 13, 2023 at 9:25 PM

Yeah, I can imagine that...

Paula Goldsmith

July 16, 2023 at 12:44 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you can imagine my icy rain write. Have a great day writing away................

Robert Lindley

July 9, 2023 at 5:02 PM

Reminds me of my childhood and the old farmhouse we lived in during winter. God bless....

Paula Goldsmith

July 16, 2023 at 12:33 PM

Thanks for your note. Hope your childhood and the old farmhouse were good memories. Have a great day writing away................

Gershon Wolf

July 8, 2023 at 9:10 PM

So many places that I, your reader, can take this. Love these kind of writes. Thank you, Paula!

Paula Goldsmith

July 9, 2023 at 9:14 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love my write. I love writing in the Monoku style. I find them to be fun to write. Have a great day writing away.................

Katharine L. Sparrow

July 8, 2023 at 7:38 PM

it's a lovely noise, if you're going to sleep! but I don't want to think of icy rain now, I love SUMMER!

Paula Goldsmith

July 9, 2023 at 9:11 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Icy Rain write. I also enjoy Summer. Winter will be here soon enough. Have a great day writing away.................

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 7, 2023 at 7:53 AM

- A good one, Paula ... don't wake me up at night with such drums :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

July 7, 2023 at 3:05 PM

Thanks for your note and for your luck. Glad you like this Icy Rain write. I will let you sleep. Hugs... Have a great day writing away.................