Joseph Osita Poet Choka

Murmurs of a Chair

Anxiety chokes thought
Hearing murmurs of a chair
In a shadowed room
Some glimmers of secrecy
Hankers in this lonely end? 


For Rick Praise's contest:” Chair in a shadowed room

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Carolyn Devonshire June 10, 2011 at 11:07 AM Joseph, I wanted to thank you for your comments. Feeling a bit better today and am trying to catch up on some comments. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire June 7, 2011 at 9:04 AM Compelling poem, Joseph. The first line is especially awesome and I love your description of secrecy remaining in the ends of the shadowed room. Best wishes in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song June 7, 2011 at 4:24 AM Hi Jo- I am fascinated by this picture that Rick choose. Your take is very nice and full of wonder...what happened in this chair of yours? You now have me guessing..nice angle. Best of luck to you. Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud June 7, 2011 at 12:27 AM another wonder from you, joseph! come visit me..:) huggs and congrats with your zulu baskets!

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2011 at 9:25 PM A dark one like mine. I enjoyed reading this, JOseph!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 6, 2011 at 8:49 PM brilliant write Joseph... like the flow of the piece luv.. good luck in the contest luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta June 6, 2011 at 6:22 PM Very nice interpretation of the picture with a nice perspective, Joseph