Murmuring Softly

Nicely written!

Such a sweet SENRYU, Laurie! Superb 's' alliteration and perfect 575 meter... Great job!!! Best wishes, Keith

Nicely written. Much is packed in three lines. Keep writing. Sara

This is sweet. I had four kids. My morning song was Let There Be Drums. Just joking. Great write. Have a wonderful day. Vince

ooh this is lovely. -Brooke

Lovely image, Laurie. Imagine a day when even doves are mourning, but their song provides peace for you. Beautiful, gentle poem! Love, Carolyn

Very peaceful. Nice.

Dear Sis, Laurie, Excellent Senryu I agree with the soothing songs of the "Mourning doves My Soul aches more than YOURS Thank-YOU for Your Gracious Comments LOVE ALWAYS... HG Soup Mail Call

Feels soothing to me. Nice use of alliteration and imagery. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comments on my Brevette. Keep up the good writing! Karen

How can a soul that aches create such a gift of beauty ... it must be the tender nest of the mourning doves. Love it!

Ah, those doves. beautiful, Laurie. cooing their way to heaven. love, Kristin

The doves have moved into our fig tree..I was going to write something about it..but forget it..you have written what i wish i could have...lovely. BG

oh how wonderful!....this is just lovely Laurie......nice work...love n smiles Maryam

Soft & swett together Laurie.Thank you for your welcome comments on my postings .Rgds Brian

Laurie, I aplogize profusely for my remark... Please forgive me... K.

I have been advised to remove the words 'you're gonna get it!!!' from my comments. It was meant only in fun... but if we must be PC, (though I think this is stretching it a bit), they are hereby removed... happy now?

A melody I can feel ... a need I share ... a sweet write of a poem.

I think I would stay in bed all day, to listen if I could! This is a beauty, my friend!! They do know how to carry a lovely tune, don't they?? xoxo

Laurie, this is stunning beauty. Every now and then they pay me a visit in my back yard, two at a time. Your poem says it all. Outstanding. Love, Shar

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A beautiful SENRYU/HAIKU honey! Marvelous 's' and 'm' alliteration... you got it PERFECT!!!! Hugs, Keith

I love the first line..mysterious song..something about that connects with me..well done and thanks for the rocking comments.

....I was just looking at "Your" title to this, "Your Beautiful Hearts Write," and I thought, how fitting it seems to be, in describing her herself!!!!:):)~So, I hope that those Mourning Doves shall sing "You" an even brighter song, that "Your Priceless Soul," may rejoice and sing!!!?:):)~Smile, if only I were a Dove, I would fly to where "You" are, and sing "You" one myself!!!!:):)~Lets go see what I have missed, aside from "Yourself!!!?"....

....But before I could get to "You," something came up as always, and I got tied up kind of late....Although, I am sure that it is no big deal unto "Yourself~but it is unto me!!!:):)~For I have come to admire "Your Writings Your Words," immensely so~"These Beautiful Portraits of Whom "You Are!!!!":):)....cont....

So Beautifully And Tenderly Spoken~Just As Your Words From 'Your Priceless Heart And Soul' Have Always Seemed To Be!!!!:):)~Although, to 'ever' think that "You" would hurt within even the slightest way~is a sorrow inside, my own heart and soul!!!?:):)~"Good Morning, Precious and Lovely Laurie Ginn!!!!":):)~I am sincerely sorry that I missed "Your" gifted and beautiful words yesterday!!!?:):)....cont....