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Murderous Love

i watch her as she brights up my bedroom wit her skin hair drops down her back looking like a waterfall over da morning sun she lands on top of me brushing her eyelashes on my neck im frozen,as she pierce my heart wit the sword of love i bleed internally the feel for her as i am stabbed in the heart my heart beat faster i am now a dynamite of love waiting 2 explode my feelings 2 her KABOOM!!!as my love filled the room tears from her face run like Mississippi man,what a murderous love

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Date: 8/9/2016 2:43:00 PM
Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading..Welcome to soup..Sara
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Date: 11/23/2010 1:07:00 PM
Very very passionate and sensuous thoughts on murderous love, Kevin
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