Murderous Love

i watch her as she brights up my bedroom 
wit her skin
hair drops down her back looking like a 
waterfall over da morning sun
she lands on top of me brushing her 
eyelashes on my neck
im frozen,as she pierce my heart wit the 
sword of love  
i bleed internally the feel for her
as i am stabbed in the heart my heart beat 
faster
i am now a dynamite of love waiting 2 
explode my feelings 2 her
KABOOM!!!as my love filled the room
tears from her face run like Mississippi 
man,what a murderous love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading..Welcome to soup..Sara
Mehta Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 1:07 PM
Very very passionate and sensuous thoughts on murderous love, Kevin
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