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Murder of the Innkeeper

Do you remember the night the Innkeeper’s body Was found in the pond behind his B & B, Sherlock? Of course, how could you forget? We were Meeting him that afternoon for his opening tea! I recall how we were questioned like common thugs Because we were on the property, thus suspect, But I had suspects of my own, though I kept quiet, The police, however, showed us guests no respect! You and I had no motive, no weapon, no animosity After all, we were only the afternoon company, But we knew his wife knew he was sleeping around And his chef was so jealous!...and so contrary. Then, there was the note no one shared with us, So the Innkeeper could’ve decided to do himself in After all, I was told he had debt out the ying-yang At least he didn’t shoot himself after drinking gin. You know I did not do it, and I know you’re innocent But I am suspicious of her wearing a bathing suit, And I’m told she had his wallet, credit cards and all Now, she has the B & B up for a quick sale, to boot!
EIGHTH PLACE WINNER Written August 1, 2022 Submitted to "Start Sleuthing" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Natasha L. Scragg

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Date: 9/3/2022 10:24:00 AM
Back with big congratulations on your win Milt! Linda
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Date: 9/2/2022 11:41:00 AM
Hello L Milton, liking the conversation between Holmes and Watson as they discuss a case. It's clever to have Sleuths reminiscing about things that have gone on. A very clever take on the theme. Thank you for joining the contest. Congrats on making the top ten :-D
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/2/2022 12:07:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Natasha. I really enjoyed writing for your contest.
Date: 8/6/2022 8:09:00 PM
This is a winner - Agatha Christie came to mind right away and Sherlock Holmes naturally! You are going to do well in this contest my friend.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/6/2022 9:08:00 PM
I hope so, Caren. I thoroughly enjoyed making this one up.
Date: 8/4/2022 7:43:00 AM
This reminds me of Agatha Christie, and Arthur Conan Doyle. The Sherlock Holmes series of mysteries. Well written Milton only you as the writer knows who done it...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/4/2022 8:03:00 AM
Hmmm...a few red herrings, but I suppose I was not clear enough about the real killer. How about that!
Date: 8/3/2022 3:26:00 PM
This is a 'who done it.' So, did his wife do him in?
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/3/2022 6:06:00 PM
Hey Jenna, I thought we could leave it up to the reader to decide???? This is the first time I've tried to write a "who done it" poem.
Date: 8/3/2022 5:30:00 AM
A clever sleuthing tale Milt. GL in the contest! Linda
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/3/2022 8:12:00 AM
Thanks, Linda. I've not written anything like this since I wrote a short story a long time ago leaving a murder up in the air. It's in my book "Ashes on the Snow."

Book: Reflection on the Important Things