Murder Maybe
ANOTHER DOUBTING PROMISE
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Yeah yeah, I heard all about your word
I read your comic book through and through
My eyes absorbed the absurd premise about a taunting and talking snake
And along with Thomas I am one of the doubting few
Yeah yeah, there was this apple
And a word you called “temptation”
So the chick sacrificed a rib and ate of the fruit
And as for me your whole novel causes me only consternation
Now let’s examine the exhibits exposed
Exhibit “A” is ridiculous at best
Exhibit “B” proves that your god has a sick sense of humor
And as for the results of further examination simply eliminate the rest
There’s only one thing missing in your comic book
There are no multi-colored images and/or illustration
You and your staff wrote a whole lot of stuph
However were you to ask my religion I would reply “I worship wonderment and fascination”
© 2011.…..
~free
Yo L!……A man can have his dreams, can’t he?
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