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From the mother of all mothers
tongue tied 
to a tree
naked



5/3/2019


Navel Gazing
Liberum Divisa Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Gregory Barden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashford Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 2:39 PM
Awesome. It made my brain flip.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 7:22 AM
Thank you Eric! This bit a snippet from my poem Navel Gazing, the more serious bit in a guided brain flip tour ;D,
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 7:23 PM
Congratulations on your win Mo. This sent my thoughts on a journey. : )
Roper Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Good choice , Maureen, congratulations on your 3rd place win. Hugs Eve
Godwin Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 12:21 PM
My brain and I thought tripped thru this read and still can't land. I feel I read a riddle that was a poetic tickle leaving me lost in 'WHAT's middle'. I've learned that I'm often floundering where others find total clarity, so it may be that or I may need to dust my depths. Either way, I recognize that talent mastered image with words - you! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 9:58 PM
I don't think I could hope for a better response to this piece :))) It's the serious bit plucked from the fluff of my poem Navel Gazing. I'm not sure that piece would offer clarity to anything other than maybe more about me lol ;) Thank you so much CayCay! xomo
Michael Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 3:03 AM
Nice visuals... tied up dying to be loose...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Thank you my friend :) xomo
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