Mummy.............

Love is a gift from god,
And you gave it to me
Kind and tender you were always;
So calm like the gentle sea.
How rude and naughty sometimes I was, 
My fault, I do regret..
I am sorry mum for hurting you
I know that I'm your pet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Adeite Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 8:44 AM
Crystal, you are like a demigod to me, I do not know why, I went through your comments on my poems and I feel great. Please activate your soupmail in your member area, so we could discuss more… change this poem’s form to free verse. I wrote a tribute poem for you titled “ Crystal… her noble name” send me a soupmail to reply this. I have a lot to share
Shango Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 8:32 PM
Stop making me blush for her ... I love the bond ... the knit of tightness. Good write.
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June 4, 2009 at 10:45 AM
Crystal.. When your mother reads this and she smiles through the tears in her eyes, tell her she is not alone. I cried and smiled too. You're a wonderful daughter and a better writer. Thanks for this one. Your Devoted, Will
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June 3, 2009 at 7:43 AM
yeah, mums must be respected like gods... but we often step on their toes
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