Mum the Financial Advisor

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Mum, The Financial Advisor ‘You are the tea leaves I am the teapot, I the tiny snowflake and you the snow’ Thus sets the stage of similarities and whatnot, lighting the mood for the afterglow, The morning after, we see what had been taught, not much but the status quo, You are the cream and sugar, I am the coffee, I the beehive and you the honey, Taste has sweetened, well-brewed and lofty, firm prospect meaning money, More meaningful, and the setting more warmly, gainfully significant and carefree, Ergo, breakfast entertains calmly and promptly, ending in a financial apogee, Good morning moments, familial time, satisfyingly, and a future that was meant to be. 2020 February 24 *2nd Place* Poetic lines from a Poetry Soup Poet - Maria Williams ~~Silent One

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/25/2020 11:05:00 PM

One of my favorite movies, Breakfast at Tiffany's William, great written poem from the one line and a big congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest-Stay safe and healthy my friend. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/26/2020 12:31:00 AM

A wealth in words, Eve, a pleasure to receive, and yes indeed, by all means, stay safe as well with you and your love ones -- Aloha!~@wk

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2020 2:37:00 PM

- "Good morning moments, familial time ... and carefree ... "- Suddenly everything is turned upside down - In today's world this sounds like a distant dream ... beautiful :) - Congratulations on your win, William :) - Stay healthy and safe :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/25/2020 2:47:00 PM

Well thoughtful words, Anne-Lise, cherished and welcomed -- Aloa!~@wk

Silent One

Date: 3/25/2020 5:44:00 AM

Nice take on the contest William, mum always knows best.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/25/2020 6:17:00 AM

My thanks indeed, dear friend, for my placement and generous words -- Aloha!~@wk

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/25/2020 7:34:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this, poetically expressed beautifully. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently sponsored contest. God bless you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/25/2020 7:42:00 AM

Amen and true blessings upon thy countenance, Beata -- Aloha!~@wk