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Shielded Scalded Polished Pointed Her life was like shielded, scalded, tar; her love was like, polished, pointed star.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/26/2011 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tyburn" contest Cecil. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:26:00 PM
Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in Tyburn contest... nice choice of words luv..
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Cecil. Seems I hardly see you any more, so it's nice to see you on a winners' list!
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:29:00 PM
Cecil, Quite good, a worthy poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/25/2011 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in my contest,cecil
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Date: 8/17/2011 1:37:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your creative poetry with us Cecil and the best to you in the contest. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2011 8:10:00 AM
Thanks for the entry, cecil
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Date: 8/16/2011 11:37:00 PM
very nice!
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