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mulberry trees and butterflies

channeling 
my thoughts
towards 
earth star chakra
I stand 
rooted
feeling safe

it is fall

my thoughts
linger around
sadness
like Monarch
butterflies
clustering on
mulberry trees

preparing 
for migration

a thought 
here and there
pass
I mind my
breath 
trance-like
peace envelopes

metamorphosis

thoughts 
return, I 
see again, my
mind sashays
down glittered
cluttered runway
as always

cycle begins

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Beata Agustin Date: 3/30/2025 6:28:00 AM Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/31/2025 12:15:00 AM Your visit and kind words means a blessing too dear pious friend. Thank you dear poet.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/29/2025 5:34:00 AM … like Monarch butterflies clustering on mulberry trees… Congrats, Thriveni! Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/31/2025 12:14:00 AM Yeye, thank you dear friend for your kind visit and sweet words. Thank you dear poet.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa Date: 3/28/2025 9:37:00 PM Congrats on your placement. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/31/2025 12:14:00 AM Thank you dear friend for your precious time, kind visit and words. Thank you so much.

Sotto Poet Date: 3/28/2025 8:51:00 PM Congrats on your win with this outstanding poem. It was a pleasure to read Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/31/2025 12:13:00 AM I am delighted to read your sweet kind words dear poet, I am grateful to you for the kind visit and blessings too. thank you.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/28/2025 2:04:00 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I love the Monarch butterflies the best. All are pretty. Spring Blessings To You......... Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/28/2025 8:20:00 PM Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. They are pretty, yes. Thank you for the spring blessings dear friend. Many happiness to you too.

David Crandall Date: 3/28/2025 11:32:00 AM Great poem, beautifully worded. it seems like the migration cycle is a metaphor for your thought cycle. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/28/2025 8:19:00 PM Thank you so much for your kind visit dear friend. yes it is, thank you very much.

Joe Maverick Date: 3/24/2025 11:56:00 AM The turn of everything..The burn of knowledge Maybe we are 'unwilling to loose?' Too much When all is to gain.' Yet we seem entangled in The strain? How can I refrain.? Discern when Loss will change its name.' Good reading here Thriveni all blessings.' Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/25/2025 8:05:00 AM Your kind visit with inimitable words brings me joy dear poet. Thank you for the blessings. means so much to me. Thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/22/2025 9:40:00 PM Thriveni, this is a wonderful, masterfully written verse! Thank you for sharing this jewel of a poem. Best wishes. :) Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/23/2025 2:55:00 AM Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. Your words means so much to me, fills me with joy. Thank you for the blessings. Thank you.

Ink Empress Date: 3/22/2025 6:45:00 AM Dear poetic soul, This is so beautiful! The seamless flow of your words and how youv chosen words that go with the prompt on a spiritual level and more is so heart touching and moving! Impressive take! I especially love the way youv used metamorphosis and also the opening and ending in this! Best wishes always! Sending you light Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/23/2025 2:55:00 AM Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. Your precious time and kind words means so much to me. Thank you very much.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/22/2025 3:17:00 AM So true. A cycle begins. That's the way life goes on. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/23/2025 2:54:00 AM Thank you for your kind visit and precious time dear poet. You say beautifully, 'That's the way of life'! Thank you very much dear poet.

Sotto Poet Date: 3/21/2025 7:58:00 PM That was expressed so effectively. Outstanding work on the poem, Thriveni. I completely like it. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/22/2025 1:53:00 AM I am grateful to you for your kind visit dear poet. I am elated to get this 'outstanding' from you sir. Thank you very much, thank you.

Lin Lane Date: 3/21/2025 7:40:00 AM Your lines kept me focused on the scene as if I was watching you from caterpillar into a beautiful Monarch, and watched you fly away. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/22/2025 1:51:00 AM I am delighted by your kind visit and precious words dear poet. Thank you so much. You made my day, thank you for this joy.