thriveni c mysore Poet Verse

mulberry trees and butterflies

channeling 
my thoughts
towards 
earth star chakra
I stand 
rooted
feeling safe

it is fall

my thoughts
linger around
sadness
like Monarch
butterflies
clustering on
mulberry trees

preparing 
for migration

a thought 
here and there
pass
I mind my
breath 
trance-like
peace envelopes

metamorphosis

thoughts 
return, I 
see again, my
mind sashays
down glittered
cluttered runway
as always

cycle begins

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Beata Agustin March 30, 2025 at 6:28 AM Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 12:15 AM Your visit and kind words means a blessing too dear pious friend. Thank you dear poet.

Kim Rodrigues March 29, 2025 at 5:34 AM … like Monarch butterflies clustering on mulberry trees… Congrats, Thriveni! thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 12:14 AM Yeye, thank you dear friend for your kind visit and sweet words. Thank you dear poet.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa March 28, 2025 at 9:37 PM Congrats on your placement. thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 12:14 AM Thank you dear friend for your precious time, kind visit and words. Thank you so much.

Sotto Poet March 28, 2025 at 8:51 PM Congrats on your win with this outstanding poem. It was a pleasure to read thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 12:13 AM I am delighted to read your sweet kind words dear poet, I am grateful to you for the kind visit and blessings too. thank you.

Paula Goldsmith March 28, 2025 at 2:04 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I love the Monarch butterflies the best. All are pretty. Spring Blessings To You......... thriveni c mysore March 28, 2025 at 8:20 PM Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. They are pretty, yes. Thank you for the spring blessings dear friend. Many happiness to you too.

David Crandall March 28, 2025 at 11:32 AM Great poem, beautifully worded. it seems like the migration cycle is a metaphor for your thought cycle. thriveni c mysore March 28, 2025 at 8:19 PM Thank you so much for your kind visit dear friend. yes it is, thank you very much.

Joe Maverick March 24, 2025 at 11:56 AM The turn of everything..The burn of knowledge Maybe we are 'unwilling to loose?' Too much When all is to gain.' Yet we seem entangled in The strain? How can I refrain.? Discern when Loss will change its name.' Good reading here Thriveni all blessings.' thriveni c mysore March 25, 2025 at 8:05 AM Your kind visit with inimitable words brings me joy dear poet. Thank you for the blessings. means so much to me. Thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 22, 2025 at 9:40 PM Thriveni, this is a wonderful, masterfully written verse! Thank you for sharing this jewel of a poem. Best wishes. :) thriveni c mysore March 23, 2025 at 2:55 AM Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. Your words means so much to me, fills me with joy. Thank you for the blessings. Thank you.

Ink Empress March 22, 2025 at 6:45 AM Dear poetic soul, This is so beautiful! The seamless flow of your words and how youv chosen words that go with the prompt on a spiritual level and more is so heart touching and moving! Impressive take! I especially love the way youv used metamorphosis and also the opening and ending in this! Best wishes always! Sending you light thriveni c mysore March 23, 2025 at 2:55 AM Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. Your precious time and kind words means so much to me. Thank you very much.

Victor Buhagiar March 22, 2025 at 3:17 AM So true. A cycle begins. That's the way life goes on. thriveni c mysore March 23, 2025 at 2:54 AM Thank you for your kind visit and precious time dear poet. You say beautifully, 'That's the way of life'! Thank you very much dear poet.

Sotto Poet March 21, 2025 at 7:58 PM That was expressed so effectively. Outstanding work on the poem, Thriveni. I completely like it. thriveni c mysore March 22, 2025 at 1:53 AM I am grateful to you for your kind visit dear poet. I am elated to get this 'outstanding' from you sir. Thank you very much, thank you.

Lin Lane March 21, 2025 at 7:40 AM Your lines kept me focused on the scene as if I was watching you from caterpillar into a beautiful Monarch, and watched you fly away. thriveni c mysore March 22, 2025 at 1:51 AM I am delighted by your kind visit and precious words dear poet. Thank you so much. You made my day, thank you for this joy.