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Kai's Mulberry Trees and Butterflies Contest ~ March 19, 2025

Each year I plant an herbal garden very near a stand of mulberry trees and every Spring when they're in bloom they attract butterflies and honey bees. This morning, as I tended the sweet basil, a young Monarch landed close to my hand. Then, a cloud of them swirled around me, and flew back to the mulberry trees to land. For that moment I dared not move an inch, mesmerized by the wooshing of their wings. It was so memorable, that I'll never forget. Their humming was like a song Nature sings. I watched them flutter. Thirty, maybe more before clinging on to leaves of vibrant green. Their bold colors of black, orange and gold looked just like petals as I watched them glean.

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Date: 3/28/2025 8:25:00 PM
Beautiful to have them swirl around, brings up some inexplicable joy. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 3/29/2025 6:35:00 AM
Yes, it is, thriveni. It's like being in a fairytale world! THank you.
Date: 3/28/2025 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love butterflies and I love your wonderful write. They are very special to see. Have a fun/blessed weekend as you write away...........
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Date: 3/29/2025 6:35:00 AM
Thanks a bunch for your kind remarks, Paula. Happy weekend to you.
Date: 3/20/2025 9:50:00 AM
Nice poem with vibrant imagery.
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Date: 3/29/2025 6:34:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Jay.
Date: 3/20/2025 5:42:00 AM
Dear Lin, I just had to tell you how much I loved your piece and you may have a winner. The butterflies and the mulberry trees brought a huge smile to my face on this first day of spring. I love it when I can almost feel the magic of the moment especially as you described. Your connection to nature shines through beautifully, and it’s so inspiring! A great poem makes everything feel a bit more alive. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 3/29/2025 6:34:00 AM
Nine days late with responding to you, Daniel...forgive me. Reading your gracious comments reminded me of what I'd written, lol...Not senile just busy with many writings lately. Thank you for being such a supportive friend.
Date: 3/19/2025 8:41:00 PM
What beautiful imagery Lin!
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Date: 3/19/2025 8:48:00 PM
Hi Garrett and thank you very much.
Date: 3/19/2025 3:03:00 PM
wow Lin i dont need a picture to see this in my mind's eye - would love to see these butterflies for real one day! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/19/2025 5:10:00 PM
They're special and delicate. Survival rate from egg to adult is 50%
Date: 3/19/2025 2:05:00 PM
Beautiful Lin. They are amazing creatures. How remarkable is it that the offspring navigate to the same place in Mexico every year? You describe something that one would be very lucky to experience. Sounds wonderful. Smiles!
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Date: 3/19/2025 5:06:00 PM
My daughter has a milkweed garden and when I visit I sit very still near it, and they fly all around and some land on me. She takes some inside if the weather get a bit too chilly and it's been educational to watch them eat and eat and then form a chrysalis and hatch. Watching them is a wonderful experience. Thanks, Duke.

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