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Inspired by stormy weather

Mudslide

MUDSLIDE

my heart storms with unkempt rain
soil slides off eyelashes

Kim Rodrigues © 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kinch  Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 12:06 PM
Can feel the anguish in your words, well written Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 12:10 PM
Thank you, Elizabeth
Coreggia Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 10:50 AM
What a beautiful way to express pain and sorrow. Very well done! Amitiés
Rodrigues Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 11:11 AM
Thank you, Anne-Marie!
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