Mud

mud, first sign of spring
earth's pudding bubbling with life
tiny buds simmer

2/24/2021

Spring Traditional Haiku poetry contest
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Romios Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 8:21 PM
John~ never thought of it this way)) Unique. Pangie
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 6:35 PM
I LOVE this kind of imagery. So creative. Thanks for my win, John.
Sambourne Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 6:19 PM
Excellent haiku. Spring and mud are indeed inseparable. Best wishes, Brian
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 6:50 AM
I love the smell of mud in the spring...“earth’s pudding”, yum! I’m going to remember that. xomo
Pettit Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 9:49 AM
A most original idea for a poem. It's good.
Mcintosh Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 6:43 AM
This is surely an original... a wonderful haiku. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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