Much To My Chagrin

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Curtal Sonnet
A curtal Sonnet has eleven lines with a rhyme scheme of abc  abc  dcb  dc
It has 10 syllables in lines 1 through 5  and 7 through 10, however 
it has only two (2) syllables in lines 6 and 11 and they rhyme with lines 3,6, and 8.

I remember picking wild strawberries with my sisters so my mom could make jam. I looked for a glass jar to put them in, thinking the bigger, the more it carries. But I didn't much give a tinker's damn, how thin. As I ran ahead, I fell on my butt shattering my jar, much to my chagrin. Baring my ass, I proved this was no scam, bleeding badly, I showed how it had cut my skin. (Curtal Sonnet) 10-26-2020

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Date: 11/21/2020 2:14:00 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest. I appreciate you taking the time and writing this nice event from your life. Delicious looking strawberries. Sara
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Date: 10/26/2020 10:06:00 AM
Well said, Emile, your picture in words show a prideful and painful picture.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/21/2020 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile
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