much needed dip
Orange sky, tropical balmy night
Sun sneaks down into the ocean
Taking a much-needed dip
Sliding in first with her feet
Unsatisfied, she eases herself down to her waist
The cool cold water feels delectable.
She slides down to her neck
Finally dunking her head, gracefully disappearing
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