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Much less hollow
It is unfortunate that you don't always feel what you know
When life is just left; and all you are doing is putting on a show
It's lucky that in these dimming moments, the moon does still glow
And cool fall winds tend to blow; across the passing of moments so low
For these feelings, sleeping inside there is less found, also much less a abandoned hollow
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