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Much less hollow

It is unfortunate that you don't always feel what you know
When life is just left; and all you are doing is putting on a show
It's lucky that in these dimming moments, the moon does still glow
And cool fall winds tend to blow; across the passing of moments so low
For these feelings, sleeping  inside there is less found, also much less a abandoned hollow
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 2:57 PM
This piece stirs in me a particular time and musing moon. Lovely done. xomo
Scorpio Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 3:20 PM
Thank you Mo :) .... A sad evening last weekend when I was watching a very large harvest moon rising, while listening to and enjoying the scent of corn being chopped. Finest Regards A.S.
Hind Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 3:57 PM
I hear you. Like your take on this. :) <3
Scorpio Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 10:48 AM
Finding inner peace, for me at least is all about owning that I don't know everything. Life is just one long evolving lesson. Appretiate the like <3! A.S.
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