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Much less hollow

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It is unfortunate that you don't always feel what you know When life is just left; and all you are doing is putting on a show It's lucky that in these dimming moments, the moon does still glow And cool fall winds tend to blow; across the passing of moments so low For these feelings, sleeping inside there is less found, also much less a abandoned hollow

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Date: 9/19/2024 2:57:00 PM
This piece stirs in me a particular time and musing moon. Lovely done. xomo
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Date: 9/19/2024 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Mo :) .... A sad evening last weekend when I was watching a very large harvest moon rising, while listening to and enjoying the scent of corn being chopped. Finest Regards A.S.
Date: 9/18/2024 3:57:00 PM
I hear you. Like your take on this. :) <3
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Date: 9/19/2024 10:48:00 AM
Finding inner peace, for me at least is all about owning that I don't know everything. Life is just one long evolving lesson. Appretiate the like <3! A.S.

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